i noticed that in the earlier chapter your paragraphs had no spacing between them, before or after, and that made reading them somewhat difficult. but this last chapter didn't have that problem. you might want to give a quick review.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
like the story. Only curious on one thing did Buffy lost her voice because it´s a story about four people but It was mostly Jon, Xander and some Willow and a little bit Buffy. that´s my only complain.
A sequel would be fun to read.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
You can add me to the list of people eagerly awaiting a sequal. Very good story.
Usually not a fan of Jon or Xander as they usually quickly become "Uber" in most fics and were starting to edge that way here, but you didn't let it get too out of hand and the story was very well done so I could get past that. Pitty Willow and Buffy were a little under-used but hopefully the next part can take care of that.
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to seeing the next part.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
I really enjoyed this, I hope you continue and show what happens. My one question is how does Willow handle it if her spirit is the world tree, is it any world tree, or are there consequences for leaving earth?
Comments from author:
That particular question gets explained a bit or a lot, in the next part. It's underway, but Invasions and Perceptions is getting my full attention at the moment. 5 more chapters there, and it'll be a wrap.
Review By [Nycorson] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
*smiles* I never fail to be entertained by the stories you write - this one is no exception, and now I'm waiting for the sequel... your work is ALWAYS worth reading!
See you on FF.net too - TraceyC[laybon]
Review By [TraceyC] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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