Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
pinkhairedharryReview:
I like this so far but i'm confuse. Will Ryan show up or is Dawn replacing Ryan
Comments from author:
I won't spoil anything, but your question should be cleared up shortly.
Review By [
pinkhairedharry] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
CPTSkipReview:
Interesting start. I thought the OC started out great, but too soon jumped the shark. I look forward to reading more. I like your nice "soap opera-ish" mystery of what went on in Rome? Was it a boy? A girl? A vampire? If Dawn was Xander's sister, I would wonder if it was a demon. Lol! As I wrote, I look forward to reading more of your story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, The OC has always been a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. As for what happened in Rome stay tuned...
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated