Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
nemogbrReview:
Too short, perhaps Andrew was recruited to a black ops team and needed to change identities?
Might be a good way to bring him back.
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nemogbr] • Date [17 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
purrfusReview:
Different. A bit abrupt.
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purrfus] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
CPTSkipReview:
Oo-yah! Airborne! Nicely done, if a bit short.
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CPTSkip] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated