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Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from Netchka
Review:
Great story.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from mendenbar
Review:
Always a good fic to re-read. I wish someone would write the story Cordy told, "The Angel of LA." I'd like to hear how she would made all of that into a children's story! LOL
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [17 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from spygrrl
Review:
I enjoyed reading this story a great deal. A very creative way of merging "Angel" & "Bones." I think you captured the essence of the "Bones" episode well.

A few critiques - there were several typos and/or spelling errors so even if you do use spell check, it is always a good idea to get another pair of eyes to look over your work for mistakes and suggestions.

My other critique you may have put a bit too much to deal with in a short story - I would have liked more explanation about Angel becoming Seeley and how that fits into the "Bones" timeline since "Angel" ended in 2004 and "Bones" started in 2005 (but as we just learned in the "Bones" 100th episode Booth & Brennan had actually worked their first case a year earlier). Plus, you have Connor at age 16 when he was 19 by the time "Angel" ended. If you are going to play with these details (which is fine) you just might want to clarify that in an author's note at the start of the story - i.e. I had to play with the Angel and/or Bones timeline in order to merge the two worlds so instead of ending in 2004, "Angel" ended in 2002, for example.

Otherwise, great piece and I think you definitely have storytelling skills. Would love to read more Bones/Angel crossovers.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from purrfus
Review:
You've conveyed an incredible amount of complexity in a very small space. Comprehending and enjoying the story requires a strong familiarity with the Bones characters from season 1.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
I love it!
Comments from author:
Thankies!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
A bit ambiguous about Booth/Angel retaining some vampiric strength, but otherwise an interesting way of blending Angel and Booth's lives together; definitely one of the more effective takes on this concept I've seen.
Comments from author:
Thank you- it isnt easy to work two very different fandoms into each other- I tried to merge it the best I could.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from Cordelia
Review:
AWESOME!! *Waves back*, I really liked how even though Connor was so much better/stable he still had "problems* for lack of a better word and the he still had to adjust to the world around him.
Comments from author:
-waves- I wanted this less angsty to what the challenge reply will be- mainly because it was a Christmas episode and I felt that Connor angst wouldn't fit it. Overall, I wanted to show a way for them to bring Brennan into the Christmas they would be having- sort of bringing her into the family. I assume they would have known how protective Angel was of her. But I did have to let Connor have some problems- he's just more well-adjusted in this idea- I thought that Cordelia being alive would have helped him get over some issues. I imagine he and Cordy sat down and talked about what happened. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Cordelia] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Son's of Booth" from angelus
Review:
really like that Cordelia didn't die after all and that Spike and Angel both got Shanshus and that they retained their strength and speed cause now they can continue fighting. Plus cool that Connor is much more adjusted now of course that was hinted at the end of Season 5 when he went back to help his father.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [angelus] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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