Total YES to the sequal! I love how House and BUffy are together and I'm curious as to where it'll go (ofcourse I'm also real curious how House will react to 'the talk' :D
Review By [Anne] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story, but I feel there are far too many loose ends. What happened with Buffy's Dad? Dawn came shortly after Buffy discovered he had cancer, but we don't know what Dawn's reaction is. I mean, I'm pretty sure she's never met him in her "real" life, right? Does he even know about Dawn, or did the monks' spell not reach that far? Does House know her dad abandoned her? If the man had been around, maybe Buffy would have been able to deal better with everything and wouldn't have had that dissociative episode. Not to mention Buffy telling House about the supernatural. And how will House react when he finds out Chase knows Buffy's secret, but she hasn't told *him*? I can see him getting rather petty about it.
This was a pretty good, well-told story. I think it bogged down a bit much with he episode part, and then wrapped up far too quickly. Basically, pacing issues. But I still liked reading it, and would certainly read a sequel -- although given where it left off, it'd be more a continuation than anything else.
Review By [Listener] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Thanks for giving this such a satisfactory resting place, and I hope you are inspired to write a sequel one day (but until then, House and Buffy are in a good place).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Good story. I hope you get your plot bunny back though because it really does need more as it has an incomplete feel to it still and it is good enough to deserve a proper finish.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
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