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Review of chapter "CH 4: Jurassic Park My Red..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well the plot is a bit RPG game in nature, but some of the characterization and interactive dialog is fun.
Comments from author:
Well I did used to be a GM, DM, HM (Game Master, Dungeon Master, Hunt Master) but that was 20 years ago! ;)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay. Usage wise, I think it makes more sense to talk about a change in "gender" than a change in "sex". I don't know quite how Alexander became a Harkness. In some ways the back-stories are more interesting to me at the moment than the front-burner. But I'll give your story a chance to grab me.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and the chance. The explanation of how, Xander (Dre) became a Harkness was cut by me muse/editor whatever you want to call her, because it was too long and involved. Suffice it to say that the Doctor was missing some of Xander's DNA when he was cloned and used the necessary chromosomes of Jack's as an substitute. Though Dre does not have Jack's memories she does have some of his abilities, as well as those programed in by the doctor. Note: this is NOT meant to be the canonical Doctor Who, Torchwood or any other show represented it is strictly AU and Fiction at that. Enjoy!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 10: Sacrificial Lambs" from Genuka
Review:
Oh, you are utterly evil!!!!!! Sacrifical Lambs indeed. Dang dude. EVIL INCARNATE!!!!!! *ominiously*

But not the devil, no, the doc tossed him into a black hole! *brightly*
Comments from author:
The sequel is called "Wonderland" the Doctor has a new impossible mission for them. Cure the obsessive psychosis of a World Mind!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 9: The Serpent and the Rose" from celticjenn
Review:
I was a bit leery of starting this story, but found that as I read on it was well written and certainly comical at points! Its a great story so far and I cant wait to read even more!
Comments from author:
Many thanks for the review, I strive to have it all! Comedy, Drama, Tragedy, vampires, werewolves, car chases, no wait no car chases :)
Review By [celticjenn] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 9: The Serpent and the Rose" from Genuka
Review:
Oh, you are evil! That was an evil cliffy! And you finally introduced the Rani properly. Good luck with the series. I'll be watching it.
Comments from author:
I ,told you I had an evil streak! Love ya'
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 8: The Jungles on the Mall-First Contact" from Genuka
Review:
Great chapter. This is coming along wonderfully. I'm really looking forward to Chapter 9. Forgot to tell you. Ch. 9 on mine is up... I think you're one of the people who I've been informing.... Yes! I remember now, there you go. Told you! ;D
Comments from author:
This is but the first story in a proposed series...wish me luck!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 8: The Jungles on the Mall-First Contact" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! You are updating so quickly I missed an update! Nice to see Rose show up. She was one of my favorite Companions. I am a bit bothered by how quickly the Pack is being whittled down. Especially as it is both the natural scientists. Abby is smart, but she is more of a specialist on dead and deadly things. I am beginning to wonder who will be the first to die. No matter, I can't wait for more. Lol!
Comments from author:
My thanks for the great review! At least Bones, and Cam are still alive, not everybody will be able to say that at the end...or will they? Muhahaha!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 7: New Buds, or Oh No!!!" from Sandi
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Yay! Pam's there. I love Pam. She never gets enough screen time.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 7: New Buds, or Oh No!!!" from Kremer
Review:
Getting even more interesting, but I have to wonder how both of the new people automatically 'knew' what the term "clone" meant, and neither had any immediate reactions to their new high-tech environment and surroundings upon awakening. The original awakenings certainly had their reactions and confusion, even when immediately informed of where they were and when.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 7: New Buds, or Oh No!!!" from Genuka
Review:
Nice! Mini-cat fight! Great chapter!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 6: Master of Puppets ..." from Genuka
Review:
I updated mine. I thought you'd like to know. *smirk*
Comments from author:
I do, thanks.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 6: Master of Puppets ..." from Genuka
Review:
You helped alot but now my muse wants me to use your idea with the spirits. I realize that it's not a new idea but since it's inspired by your story, I'm asking any way. Mind if I use it? It also helped tremendously that I went swimming. God, I'd forgotten how therapeutic that was and that I really do have an affinity for/with water. Not to mention it helped with my stress. I can't use the normal meditation techniques because if I go to deep it can literally lock me into the back of my head and I have to be woken up by someone else. It wont matter what I do, nothing will break it. Trust me, not fun. Then it can also be triggered by other stuff if you tempt it in the first place. Thought you'd appreciate an update. You sound like someone who writes professionally. My brain is weird, but at least I'm trying. Maybe I'll manage an actual full chapter instead of just bits and pieces now that I'm a little less stressed. Thanks. =D

Oh! Fyi. If you want to use anything in any of my reviews or stuff go ahead. But if it's from one of my stories I'd like a cite. That's all I ask. I don't use any truly new ideas so if you forget to cite me no big. It's just a preference not a requirement. Thanks again. =)
Comments from author:
Go for it darlin' remember that Xander also has an afinity for water in the form of the shark DNA he was fed on the swim team. Picture Xander with Shark AND hyena spirits!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 6: Master of Puppets ..." from CPTSkip
Review:
I continue to enjoy the heck out of your story. I don't know who the Big Bad Bitch is but could the 90 year old former Companion be Rose? The Doctor originally said this dimension's versions of Dr. Addy and Ethan created the De-evolution Virus. So who is the BBB? I guess I will just have to wait. But I really do look forward to more of your story, in spite of some oddly spelled words in your story. Lol! By the way, I like the Dre/Buffy, Moth/Dawn, and Willow/Abby parings. I can't wait to figure out who the others will be.
Comments from author:
Lets just use the hint Luddite for who the real Big Bad is. If you are a long time Dr. Who fan, you'll figure it out.
Cryptic Arjai
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 6: Master of Puppets ..." from djhardim
Review:
The mystery villianess is The Rani.
Comments from author:
;)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 6: Master of Puppets ..." from Genuka
Review:
Bravo! Bravo! This is moving right along and you've woven it together masterfully! I'll be watching for the next chapter! Nice tip about the Rani. Soooooo, who else is the doc sending? And on an off chance I'm having trouble with my story. I can't figure out an apocalypse.... It's an NCISxBuffy cross with some Hocus Pocus tossed in at the beginning to start it off. Any ideas? I even went so far as to bring in Merlin! It's under my profile if you want to read what I've got up.... Any help would be greatly appreciated. Hope to see you update again soon!
Comments from author:
i shall look forward to reading your work, and if I can in some small way act as muse I will happily do so! BTW: many thjanks to my biggest fan!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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