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Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from winnie
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fun story, wide open for sequels...looking forward to more work by you...
Review By [winnie] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from Genuka
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That was really good. =D
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from AriaDragoncrest
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Excellent story.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from VillageOrchid
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Stylistically a bit first draft-ish in the last chapter, with too many repeating elements.
Cute story overall.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losses" from VillageOrchid
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Very interesting the villains can use non-wizarding magic for an attack, but don't consider that it could also be used for a defense.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Curses" from VillageOrchid
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Hoping that Rupert or other back up came with. I thought perhaps it was an imperious spell, and she was dying because she couldn't fulfill the commands she was given. So interesting twist here and bringing conflict to a head.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happy Holidays" from VillageOrchid
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Some interesting AU-plot twists here.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Awww, what a schmoopy ending *silly grin*. I love schmoopy endings - well, sometimes I do. This is definitely one of those times.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losses" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Whew, had me worried there for a minute with Snape dying. Again, it just seems so strange to regret the death of someone like Snape.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Curses" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Cool use of the 'Macho, macho man' scene. I loved that on the show.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happy Holidays" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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OMG, too hilarious for them to send Malfoy thank you owls. Of course, after the first couple, he may just start killing the owls before they can make their deliveries.

Awww, the sweetness that is Snape/Joyce at the end. Wow, sweet and Snape in the same sentence; seems like that shouldn't be possible to say, but your Snape is far more caring and approachable from a reader's POV than the canon one.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quidditch" from VillageOrchid
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Well, I like that Buffy now has 14 galleons of wizarding money, but I think it is interesting that no one corrected Ron on the difference between "servant within reason" and "slave."
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Softer side of Snape" from VillageOrchid
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Just a bit charming, despite a few word usage errors such as bodies being plural and body's being possessive. Your is possessive, while You're is you are as a contraction.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letting him know" from VillageOrchid
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A good mystery, but how did she get infected by the wormwood?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding out about Dad" from VillageOrchid
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Ah, just a we bit Mary Sue for Buffy-the-eleven-year-old child. I like the general idea, but she doesn't quite have to be such an over achiever.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
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