Hoping that Rupert or other back up came with. I thought perhaps it was an imperious spell, and she was dying because she couldn't fulfill the commands she was given. So interesting twist here and bringing conflict to a head.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happy Holidays" from VillageOrchid
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Some interesting AU-plot twists here.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of the School Year" from mmooch
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Awww, what a schmoopy ending *silly grin*. I love schmoopy endings - well, sometimes I do. This is definitely one of those times.
OMG, too hilarious for them to send Malfoy thank you owls. Of course, after the first couple, he may just start killing the owls before they can make their deliveries.
Awww, the sweetness that is Snape/Joyce at the end. Wow, sweet and Snape in the same sentence; seems like that shouldn't be possible to say, but your Snape is far more caring and approachable from a reader's POV than the canon one.
Well, I like that Buffy now has 14 galleons of wizarding money, but I think it is interesting that no one corrected Ron on the difference between "servant within reason" and "slave."
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Softer side of Snape" from VillageOrchid
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Just a bit charming, despite a few word usage errors such as bodies being plural and body's being possessive. Your is possessive, while You're is you are as a contraction.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letting him know" from VillageOrchid
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A good mystery, but how did she get infected by the wormwood?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finding out about Dad" from VillageOrchid
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Ah, just a we bit Mary Sue for Buffy-the-eleven-year-old child. I like the general idea, but she doesn't quite have to be such an over achiever.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
