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Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from CageFire
Review:
Great series. I'm hoping you'll eventually update it. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from RedDeathLV
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Want MOAR!
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Dragonwolftiger
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Don't worry about not posting, just get the chapters the way you like then post. Great fic please continue.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from CastorandPollux
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Please come back to this story as it is very good.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Genuka
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dang it! Evil cliffy! I really hope you update this soon!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from BarbarossaRotbart
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Will you continue this story? Or will you rewrite it? Or did you abandon it?
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from bookworm
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One minor detail - you already revealed Joyce's aneurysm through Ios in the last story, so she shouldn't really have been shocked enough to faint. I suppose you could edit that instead though, then Zanira wouldn't have to scold her about messing with the future.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from SledgeHammer
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Someone trumped up charges against Buffy; however, it turns out to (unsurprisngly) be connected to the only law firm that even most demons (in addition to most lawyers) despise - Wolf, Ram and Hart (WRH). Unfortunately for the Big Bad of law firms, the Shadow Court despises being played for patsies - not only were the evil lawyers fined rather heavily (with the proceeds paid to Buffy for her trouble), Angel was deputized *directly* by the Judge to take the firm down in its entirety. (The Shadow Court Chief Judge; not the construct known as the Judge AKA Super Smurf AKA Gargamel's Nightmare.) However, why is Chaotica pilfering crooks and crazies (including from Arkham)?
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Morgomir
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Great series. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Dragonelf
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I have just reread the series and was just as good as the last time I read it.

I am glad to see that you got inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Freedom means the opportunity to be
what we never thought we would be.
- Daniel J. Boorstin
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Trickasmurph
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*hunts you down and beats you silly with an oversized slug*

Okay you are forgiven for now, but don't take so long again. This is a damn good story and i was all sad and sniffly when i thought it wasn't coming back.

My slugs don't like it when I am sad and sniffly. You wouldn't like to see them angry. Don't make me sniffly again, k?
Review By [Trickasmurph] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from Stormrider
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Welcome back, glad to see another chapter. Zallana is wreaking havoc like I knew she would. Interesting she teased Batman, idolized Wonder Woman and bonded immediately with her grandma. Besides Triple Z making herself known to the Justice League. The Secret Society of Sunnydale (Triple S) is giving the JLS a run for it's money again. Amelia Faust is causing trouble, the Joker's in town, and Dru is wondering having a decision to make. Things are really heating up. I wonder what Choatica is up to, not to mention where is Spectrum? I haven't seen her in a while. and Dawn defeated Azamo, who really gave the Justice League a bit of a headache.

Things are really heating up, love to see what happens next. keep it up
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from CrystalBlaze
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Faust made the Ring of Amara an area effect? Oh, brother!

Oh, well, maybe some of them will take out Joker..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from JediKnight
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Great job on the new chapter, I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.

-Where have you been, I haven't heard from you in a while?

-How are your other fics coming?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from JoshuaRichardson
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So, your sorry for not updating, huh? Well you should be. And to make sure it doesn't happen again, I am sending the Toon Patrol (the group of five anthropomorphic animated weasels that serve as henchmen to Judge Doom in the film Who Framed Roger Rabbit) to insure you do nothing but work on the next chapter! =)

Thanks for the new chapter, hope you enjoyed the review. And the weasels enjoy pizza for dinner.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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