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Review of chapter "I dream of Heroes" from BlackWishBone
Review:
You missed out on developing your character's and the story in chapter 2. the scene at the end could have been lengthened and the whole third chapter seemed rushed.
Review By [BlackWishBone] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I dream of Heroes" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very interesting. I like the Fable crossover and I like that Xander is bringing Willow into train her.

Too bad you haven't continued this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I dream of Heroes" from sinkun
Review:
like the fic hope its not dead
Review By [sinkun] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I dream of Heroes" from DarthPayne
Review:
Hmm, this wouldn't happen to be the infamous 'Spikes Death By Elevator Music', would it?
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
Review:
Seems eh. You're going pretty far in flanderizing everyone, which isnt my cup of tea. It's also worth pointing out that Willow doesn't cast any magic until the end of S2, so... she wouldn't really be handling any mojo at that point.
Comments from author:
There's more to Heroing than magic. There is Strength and Skill, Will magic will come later.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [28 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
You went overboard in this one making the Scoobs caricatures of themselves.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Why do I have the distinct feeling Buffy's not going to be allowed to become reasonable?
Comments from author:
She'll become reasonable.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [26 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarthPayne
Review:
As a fan of Fable 1&2, and a future fan of Fable 3 i like this story so far.

I'm looking forward to mor on this.

Are there going to be more Heroes?
Comments from author:
For the next two chapters it is doubtful, but at least CENSORED number of characters will be Heroes.
To include, but not limited to: CENSORED,CENSORED and Xander Harris.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
jajajaja! Heaven is going to kick the PTB's butt!! Oh, yeah. Nice story... though the chapters are kinda short... well, until next chap, mate.
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [26 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darthridian
Review:
hmm xander might need some magical protection as buffy and willow might take matters into their own hands and cast a spell on him.

like the overall direction of the story tho.

keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I AM WHO AM is protection enough in my eyes.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MissE
Review:
Curious. Don't know the background (other than Buffy, of course) but it certainly is interesting.
Review By [MissE] • Date [26 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from djhardim
Review:
Good chapter

One correction, I think you mean lightning rather than lighting.

Since eating certain foodstuffs can also affect the Hero's alignment, will Xander have to give up junk food?
Comments from author:
Spell check is a pain, I'll need to check Twinkies in depth, because if it has animal products that require killing the animal for maybe. I'm starting to think no. It might naturally progress that way since he has a burning desire to unblock memories.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Valandar
Review:
Sadly, I think I'm gonna not read any more of this. I've seen far too many fics where Xander is kicked out of the group either a ) long before he was temporarily avoided in canon, or b ) with ten times more vehemence than ever actually existed in canon. He was shunned because they wanted to protect him - I firmly believe that if he had some power or ability then he never would have been shunned.

Still decent work so far.
Comments from author:
Might want to keep reading this isn't a shunning yet. Just a explosive argument.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [26 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anpu
Review:
Please continue all of your stories because they're excellent.
Review By [anpu] • Date [24 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
... Well... I'm not sure what's it about, but I'll be willing to give it a try!!! The Fluffy bit was hillarious!!!!!!
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [24 May 10] • Not Rated
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