Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sulien
Oh, this sucks!!! But in that 'hurts so good' way, if you know what I mean? Beautifully done.
If you're ever inclined to write a sequel where Eliot finds out how Willow died and gets to kick some ass to get the last of whatever it was that took her out, I'd love to read it!
Edited to reply: Yay! I love it when I can wake someone's Muse. *g* Thanks kindly, I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel!
Comments from author:
I have no idea how Willow died. But now I've got an inkling of an idea for a scene between Eliot and Nate...::wanders away to ponder this::
Edited to add: I just finished writing a sequel. I'm dedicating it to you, because you pinched my muse. :) It will be posted sometime in February. I really hope you enjoy it.
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from athenethegoddess
wow. how sad. and evil. you're an evil writer. but i like it :D
Review By [athenethegoddess
] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
It would be just like Willow to plan ahead, even for that. very sad.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]