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Review of chapter "~*~" from breve
Review:
this series is amazing.
i'm only taking a break from reading the rest to stop and review so you know how amazing it is :)
Review By [breve] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from BrownFinderth
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I'm eager to find out what Buffy's plan is to save Dean!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from greeniron
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This is an excellent Cas and it makes sense that your Buffy would fascinate him just like Dean. It's also interesting to see how you're playing with Buffy's heaven experience.
Review By [greeniron] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from draconis
Review:
Is "Dust and Wings" the "real epilogue" you said you were writing for "NTAD"? If not, which other posting is it...or is it still in development?

You may also wish to consider putting a timestamp on the "Status" at the heading of your series so that time-sensitive statements within the status (such as "hopefully ready to post next week") will have some context.

Some chronology and status has been rather confusing as the stories have developed.

Thanks!


edit:
Thanks for the clarification.

Another confusing item..."Yesterday's Dawn" is in your status as "Working on it", but I just found it added as chapter 2 to "Bridge the Gap". I only caught it because "BG" popped-up on tracking again. I normally would have missed it because once a story is "complete" I often "stop" tracking it to keep things manageable.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, first of all.

Secondly, chronological order is put down in the way the stories are ordered within the series. The only story where it gets kind of confusing sometimes is Toothbrush, and those are mostly marked. I think.

Statements like 'next week' are usually easy to date via the time stamp of the last posting/update.

And yes, DW is the real epilogue of NATD, seeing as how it's set directly after and I'm pretty sure I said that somewhere, too. If I didn't, I apologize.

Cheers.
Review By [draconis] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from nightshadowlife
Review:
ohhhh awesome story, so many unanswered questions though! Can't wait to start on the next one!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from Wrytergrrrl
Review:
I love this series. I stumbled upon it last night and had to read everything that was posted so far. Its so well written and the characters seem so real and spot on to me. I can almost see these plots taking place in episodes of either show.

I do have to admit that I'm a little confused about that other OTHER part of Buffy and what exactly it means, and why she knows Castiel, but maybe I just missed something when I was reading. Luckily I don't think it will be hard to read any of these over again. Except maybe the first one because Nightmare was actually really scary.
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from starletharlot
Review:
*squeals* Just for including Cas you get a hundred million points of WIN. So much glee. Subplot is always fun, don't worry! I really hope Buffy isn't considering what I think she's considering, unless she's planning on a fake-out double-cross, in which case, yes, go for it. I'm probably way off, but we'll see... Eagerly waits for more!
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from yakoba
Review:
awesome!!!!!!

very intriguing to see where this shall lead. I love how Buffy is mysterious, and the whole fighting destiny thing. very cool :)
Review By [yakoba] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from Mercury
Review:
How interesting! Looking forward to the next story like woah.
Review By [Mercury] • Date [4 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from clarityfades
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Oh wow...that was worth the wait! (enforced wait on my part, I wanted my new internet connection up w/o problems before I gave myself a present of reading fanfic LOL) Love that Bobby is treating Buffy like she's knowledge in the flesh--& it seems you've been practicing your Buffy POV a bit...I like it. :D & I love your turn of phrase...human, desert, & sky? Should be interesting once the boys start learning more of Buffy's secrets. & I can't wait to see what she has planned to save Dean from Hell (not surprised it was destined, though). I did feel really bad for Buffy, that hands are never enough...nothing on Earth can truly compare to bliss. I wonder how, or if, the boys can/will help w/ that. & though Dawn isn't one of my fave peeps from the series...I hope she calls Buffy.

Oh & btw...your Author's Note?

"So. Again with the Buffy and Bobby not really interacting. But almost. That counts, right? Also, some questions answered, more posed. And a new sub plot introduced. Why do I always complicate things?"

I've got an answer...b/c you're awesome & you love us. Subplots are fun! :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from asyouwish
Review:
Oooh, the plot thickens yet again. I absolutely love the world you've created here and the bonds you've forged between the brothers and Buffy. I can't wait to watch the relationships continue to develop in the next story (not to mention getting some real Bobby and Buffy interaction).
Review By [asyouwish] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from Esamriog
Review:
I feel dumb...I have no idea what the idea is...
Comments from author:
Don't worry, that's the point. I'll explain. Eventually.

Thanks for the R&R.
Review By [Esamriog] • Date [28 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from mybrokenangel
Review:
beautiful... love this entire series :) xoxox keep up the good work :D
Review By [mybrokenangel] • Date [28 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from amarock
Review:
Ah, Cas...good to see him! I´m intrigued by this turn and Buffy's secrets.
Hope to see more soon, and my little pervy heart can´t wait for the little AU you mentioned ;-)
Review By [amarock] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from AllenPitt
Review:
hm...so she's figured a way out of Dean's contract? Interesting. Of course if he reneges, then Sam might die, as they were warned.
Comments from author:
I always interpreted the warning to mean 'if YOU try to get out of it', ie: Dean alone. Sam and Buffy can do whatever they want, imho. They can't really be part of a contract Dean made, yeah?

Thanks for the R'n'R.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
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