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Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from Elleria
Review:
Yummy!
Comments from author:
Thanks. My first try at smut. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from cryefourme
Review:
OH Baby Me likes me likes.
Comments from author:
You do? Really? Huh. Go figure. *smug look*

So very happy you like it, Crye. Especially as this is my first try at writing something rated FR21.

Thanks for reviewing again!
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from lothlorien
Review:
very nice. especially for your first sex scene. i like how they're all equal - sometimes one tops, the next time it's someone else. brilliant.
Comments from author:
I can't say I -liked- writing the sex scene, but in this case it was a necessary evil. All in all, it came out without too much trouble. And reviewers -did- ask me to write a lemon scene. *grins* I don't really like -reading- extremely explicit sex scenes, which is probably why mine turned out really subtle.

I did like the kinks -- Xander having this -power- over them just by talking . . . And I'm glad you liked the idea of them being equal. I quite liked it myself.

I'm very happy you left me a review. Thanks!
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [27 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from silvergaurd
Review:
love it but i'm more of a xan on the bottom fan. Loved it though. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I can see Xander going both ways, but I see him just that little bit more as a bottom than as a top. ^_^

I did like Xander being in control for once. It gave me the opportunity to work in a few kinks. *grins*

I'm still glad you liked the lemon, though. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [27 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from nightowl
Review:
wonderfully done. I'd love to give you something to enjoy mocking with your friends gut I'm not that good. I loved this out take a lot. It was hot enough to rival the sun but subtle enough to allow me to imagine what went on in places. Please keep up the awesome writing.
Comments from author:
What a great comment to read.

And don't worry, I've got a lot of things I can mock. Even my family has commented on my great mocking abilities. ^_^

Hot enough to rival the sun? Wow. I'll take that for the huge compliment that it is.

I preferred keeping the scene subtle myself, so I'm especially glad you liked it too.

And I'll do my very best to keep up the 'awesome writing' as you call it. Thank you so much for leaving this wonderful review.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Roll In The Dirt" from sciphy
Review:
awww so cute... and hot! yeah, hot, that is the word I am looking for HOT!!!! good job honey!
Comments from author:
Cute and hot? I'll take it! *grins* It's apparently not bad.

Got a bit of help from a certain person I know. *winks*

Thanks for the review!
Review By [sciphy] • Date [27 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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