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Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from jaeger
Review:
I think the hotel could do with more luna...

Anyway, enjoyed this like all the others.
Thank you for sharing
Review By [jaeger] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riding the Rails or On the Right Track" from DieselDriver
Review:
Better and better. In fact, I'm betting that lefty was on the right and righty was on the left.
Comments from author:
Yep!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not so Sunnydale" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, this is so silly... Hilarious. I started laughing about 3/4 of the way through the chapter and all the way to the end. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Write more quick. There's not enough to keep me going very long.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from DieselDriver
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I don't know what comes next but as prologues go that's pretty good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from stonewar
Review:
oh wow. I like how you turned the founders on their heads a bit. Slytherin the reformer, Hufflepuff the revolutionary and Gryffindor the Pious.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Genuka
Review:
*stares in shock* You're evil... Will there be more?
Comments from author:
Of course.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope you will be adding more soon.

-What other crossovers will you use?

-Edit: I'm not offering suggestions, I'm asking what crossovers you already plan to use?
Comments from author:
I think I have enough crossovers for the moment.

Edit: I have BtVS and HP, there may be some odds and ends but they are pretty much it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from LordSia
Review:
Since they needed to keep Moody alive, I guess that the effects of polyjuice are superficial - that is, you can't just polyjuice yourself into someone, cut off a lock of hair and use it to polyjuice yourself into that person again, ad infinitum. In which case all those pregnancies? Not Harry's.
Good chapter; keep the funny stuff coming.
Comments from author:
Moody was kept alive for plot purposes, not because of something needed for Polyjuice. If simply cutting off a lock of hair caused it to change back people would have much simpler tests for it. The kids are biologically Harry's.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from AlexanderMcpherson
Review:
Little suggestion if you ever get round to it: The team if/when they get 'modern weapons', (aka guns) Harry and Fred (she has to be brought in) come up with guns that work on demons and vamps. But they dont go into the techy side of why like many writers try, like "blablabla velocity blabla balance blabla impact spread blabla explosive"

Just imply something simple, like: "See this Glock? It's a normal glock, right? you've seen the rounds, they look normal, right? Well, surprise.... they are normal. But they work on vampires. How you ask? Well, as my good friend Al said, 'Fuck you that's how'."

(a reference to the 'a wizard did it' trope, aka, 'a wizard did it, its not important, now can we get on with the show?')

actually, can you please bring Alucard into it even if just for that? And I don't mean the regular anime one, I mean the abridged version, who'd blackmail his boss for a 72 inch plasma TV with Netflix, and makes terrible puns of anime shows with his name, "well, you activated my alu-card. geddit?" and takes enthusiastic walks through the woods.
Comments from author:
Now I have to go watch that series again!

Very enthusiastic walks!
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not so Sunnydale" from Muadzin
Review:
I was quite enjoying this story when suddenly you renamed Xander into Jack, and kept naming him that way, including in his mind. For me that was the moment this story jumped the shark as its now no longer about Xander but instead about some OC character named Jack's adventure in the Buffyverse. That was my 'uh, what the....?' moment. I can understand why he gets a new name, that Xander has amnesia, but to mentally have him think like that, that's where I draw the line. Thing is, the name of the character is really important in fanfics, especially in fanfics, because there are tons of stories out there that have the characters act and behave in ways that are nothing like in the series, and yet, as long as they are named Buffy or Xander or Willow or Faith in my mind's eye I still picture them as such. But give them also a different name and have them think that way and the picture in my mind gets ruined and they're some new OC instead. And unless so specifically stated that is not the kind of story I want to read. Feels kinda like a bait and switch. So I guess this is where I take my absence.

Probably just for the best as I couldn't help but notice in other reviews that Harry Potter is now making an entrance. Don't like that franchise, want nothing to do with it, would kill it with fire if I could, so I wish you the best of luck with your story, lots of happy writings, good fortune and all and maybe your next story is more to my liking.
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
And sadly, even with proof; Harry is still a virgin and screwed, Bad Faith will skate thru free and clear if still a ferret, and lastly the last two of the trio are still morons.
Comments from author:
The Ferret is screwed and yes Ron has far too many 'didn't think' moments. Hermione did what she did to protect Luna, as no one would have believed her proof anyway.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from mackiechandler
Review:
I am wildly happy to see you writing this story again - and what a loop - A whole nuther universe.

I reeeeealy like this and appreciate your writing.
Review By [mackiechandler] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting story so far, keep up the good work. Is that harry potter thing at the end of this chapter part of this story, a different story, or just a random plot bunny?

Edit: Oh right, it slipped my mind at the time I made the review.
Comments from author:
The Nameless wizard is Harry Potter. Didn't you notice the heartstone?
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from DarthPayne
Review:
I look forward to seeing what more happens in the HP'verse before Harry arrives in the Hyperion...
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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