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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from starwolf
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ok, did they retain the knowledge this time? between Willow and Buffy that's a lot of medical experience. Xander would have merc knowledge an did Oz get any wolf control upgrades? overall a well told tale. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [21 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from twlight
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I love this wonderful wonderful story. I love the change in Halloween costumes, the fact that it helped Xander realize that Willow was a cute girl and he liked her is wonderful the whole sex thing with Buffy and Oz very interesting way to get through the first time have to say good for both of them for wanting to make what they were present for a good/remember-able time wonderful, the fact that Oz was willing to stop shows just how wonderful he is. Again I love this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from JonnWolfe
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This was very cute, and now I have a Buffy/Oz thing going in my head. Awoooo
Comments from author:
I know...they're so adorable that you just want to smoosh their cheeks.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from MemoryKing
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Pretty good S2 rewrite with many of the good points of your older B/O fic. Too bad about Cordelia, though see probably would have preferred this outcome over what happened to her in canon. Very entertaining stuff on the whole, and a more mature Buffy is always a plus in my book. The ending point was pretty good, since the major arcs had been tight up, continuing would probably have required a time-skip to the beginning of S3.

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Yeah, being turned then dusted is better than becoming the vessel for an evil goddess who wants to rule the world. Then again, this is Queen C we're talking about. *grin*
Review By [MemoryKing] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from divaslayer
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Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thanks. Any chance to get Buffy and Oz together and I'm a happy writer.
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from Mercury
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Oh how sweet. Short but really cute. We need more Buffy/Oz!
Comments from author:
Totally agree with you that people need to write more Buffy/Oz.
Review By [Mercury] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from RevDorothyL
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With Angelus and Drusilla out of the picture (permanently, barring W&H-type resurrection spells), this seems like a good place to end the story. Havng vanquished the major big bads for season 2, our friends shouldn't have too much trouble with monster-swim-team members, Bezoar eggs, etc..
Comments from author:
Yeah, without those guys, who'll bring back the Judge or try to open Acathla?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from Vigdis
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Very nice! I've never read a Buffy/Oz story before, and I really liked it.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. They are fast becoming one of my fav non-crossover couples.
Review By [Vigdis] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from clarityfades
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Aww...I'm sad it's over. But I enjoyed the ride! Great final chapter. From Ford still getting what he deserves to the Scooby gang "Home Alone-ing" Angelus & the rest of the vamps. That made me laugh kinda hard. Hee! & I really love how supportive Oz was throughout the story, especially in this chapter--even when he was worried that Buffy regretted picking him over Angel. & OMG, that "fight" w/ Cordelia was hilarious! I could picture each moment in my mind...kinda reminded me a bit of Harmony trying to take on Buffy. LOL & of course, it's nice to see Xander & Willow admitting their feelings for each other (& acting on them) WITHOUT being involved w/ other people. If only that happened in canon....

Anyhoo, great story! Hope Musie comes back to it w/ a sequel one day. I'm always up for some Buffy/Oz lovin'! :D
Comments from author:
Didn't think Angelus would actually turn Ford. *Had* to do the 'Home Alone' treatment to Angelus and Co. Glad you liked the rest of the chapter too.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Good stuff!! Thanks for feeding my Buffy/Oz new addiction (that yoooou started ;)

The only thing, I was a lil confused with the 'One Day Later'- Angelus breaks out and then he's suddenly walking down a hallway and then all the vamps die... Maybe you could clarify that they were at their HQ warehouse place? (unless I missed that).

Great job!
Comments from author:
Ooo, I started an addiction! Yay me! Sorry for the confusion on where they were.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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The end was a little anti climatic but still it was good. Thanks for sharing this with us. I get why you did that. I am feeling like finishing a bunch of my stories much earlier than originally planned myself.
Comments from author:
This was just supposed to be a quickie fic for zigpal, but apparently I have a hard time doing that. LOL.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from twlight
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Wonderful. I can see this continuing, however ending this here is also wonderful. It feels right for the story to end here, you could at a different time write a sequel but it isn't needed. Again I love this wonderful story I love that Buffy is much more grown up about things in this story vs the show. ^_^
Comments from author:
It's harder than I thought to write a fic so closely based on canon episodes. You'd think I would have learned my lesson with 'The Only One', but apparently I'm a glutton for punishment.
Review By [twlight] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from SassyFrass
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Very cute ending. I liked how they dealt with the vampires in the bomb shelter.
Thanks for sharing the story.
Comments from author:
I loved the idea of the vamps getting out of the shelter, only to die on their way to freedom.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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Noo! it ended *pout*. great story though. My fav chapter was were buffy *grin* ....did some of the effects linger?
Comments from author:
Stories have to eventually end. The were-animal effects didn't linger, but the memories/skills of the characters did. Guess it doesn't really matter unless there's a sequel though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Lie to Me" from spk
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Nice use of the "Ford" episode to bring things to a close. I think that is a very appropriate ending. Loved Buffy's pout.
Comments from author:
Yeah, once you take care of Angelus, story's pretty much over.
Review By [spk] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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