Very interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. What's going to happen to Giles? I hope nothing bad.

this is a great story! please update it soon

it will be for sure..just can't say when.

you lost me when you let travers be soft on buffy and let her live. too bad you had the potential for a gritty xander story.

ahh sometimes there are worse punishments than dead.....if Travers had really killed her her pain would be over, but now.........

Problem with changing Harmony to Aura (in chapt. 10) is that Aura wasn't a blonde. Try changing in chapt. 4.
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0925316/

tx again :)

So maybe Joyce isn't Buffy's mother?

You had Jessica kill Harmony in chapter four. So you need to come up with someone else.

tx for pointing this out, switched her with Aura and we beg for forgiveness :)

I'm not sure if you remember, but Harmony was killed off in chapter 4. I believe she was Jessica's first meal as a vampire.

ouch...you are right...replaced her wit Aura...thanks for pointing that out and shame on us :)

Joyce..A PRE-INMORTAL?????
So let me get this straight..
Cordie and JOYCE Inmortal or pre-inmortal
OZ outta control were
Jenny and Xander Hunters
Buffy Protection/new life (New life VERY LIKELY to go back to Joyce since she knows Connor!)
Wills DEAD
Xander's Mom UNDEAD (Needs to be staked.)
T. Harris DEAD!!!

right on all accounts..only buffy/joyce can talk awhile. Conor and Duncan didn't interact that often and so it can be a bit.

A meeting between Buffy/Cordy would be more possible considering the on and off with Duncan and Amanda, but we will see :)

Just curious, but are Fred and Bill (the brothers mentioned) any reference to the Weasleys? Fred and George were the twins with Bill as the eldest brother. Am guess you just pulled names, but if there is more cross to come, this would be a bit surreal to add. Not to mention, Fred and George would be likely ones to come up with a joke that bad and annoying just to plague others.

Glad to see more and hope that the next chapter comes easier for your. Later.

indeed they are, but that was all the appearance we will see from them. Just a small cameo like we had quite a lot in this fic :)

heck of a crossover story! cant wait to read more! keep up the awesome writing!
Brad

thank you again, this one is actually next on my todo list when I can go back to writing next week. So I hope it won't take to long to finish.

So Joyce, Buffy, and Cordelia get to play with Immortals. Immortals who happen to know each other at that. I see the beginnings of a farce along the lines of "The Importance of Being Ernest".

One nit: Buffy took things way too calmly. Not that the rant I had her fly in in my last review was what I was expecting, but even with her new found resolve that happened before her 'death', unless Travers was using magic to keep her calm, she should have been at least a bit agitated over events.

ahh Travers did use Magic. He bound the Slayer in her, which is the source of much of her violence in my opinion and so I wrote her much calmer than with an active slayer in her. In regards to the Immortals yes only that Cordy won't meet Buffy...probably...there are other plans atm for her. (Hawklan)

She's already proved she wasn't worthy, why give her yet another shot?

because Travers in this story is a bit nicer and has plans with her :)

♥ enjoyable♥

That was a surprise! I was so sure Buffy was dead! Why go through the trouble of having The Professional 'do a hit' on her if it was all fake?

simple Buffy's retirement was ordered by the whole senior Council and for them Buffy is now retired....all other things were done by Travers with non council operatives, I'm sure your have seen that he has a different agenda then the main council and i don't really understand how you could be surprised that she is alive was kinda obvious whit the scene in the library concerning Travers and the A-Team.

a fine update you got some real twists and turns here keep up the good work thanks and bye.