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Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from agnar
Review:
The plotline is hard to buy, the demons hunting down this tribe so constantly, don't buy it. Mainly because the tribe members don't seem that tough. The demons are tossing around slayers and such like it's easy, so what the fuck would they need these tribe members for?

If you'd made them especially strong against this particular demon race, or any sort of power that specifically connects the tribe with these demons, it'd be far more believable.

But as it is, the demons would be better off just making more demon babies, or capturing various other demons that are easier to find and more plentiful, than tracking all over the fucking world to find a handful of kinda strong humans with extra senses.

It just doesn't pass the barest of logic tests.

And it makes even less sense that 10 of these demons got to, apparently, RIGHT outside the magic box before being sensed, and that Buffy and crew were sitting around unarmed when they KNEW an attack was soon coming.

Hell, You had Xander sense the demons from a lot farther away than the other 3, and he's the newest with his 'powers'.
Review By [agnar] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Ending" from Mordare
Review:
Great story. I really enjoyed it.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Ending" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Intriguing story!! I rather enjoyed reading it and must say that I prefer the Ch 22 ending!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alternate Ending" from Eureka
Review:
Love the second ending. And YES a sequel would be nice.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Ending" from Obsidian
Review:
Great story and yeah I agree the second ending is better. it resolved more. Tho Oz going beserk and getting his ass kicked would have been nice.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
well written tale, thank you. interesting stopping point.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Eureka
Review:
Glad they managed to kill the "leader" of the demons and freed the people. Sorry, just got to catch up on the story again.
So how is Wills going to take "her" girlfriend having been mated when she was a child? Will Xan be willing to "share"? LOL
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Eureka
Review:
Cool story, just caught it and really enjoyed catching up on the whole thing.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from lorwen
Review:
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from CPTSkip
Review:
It's been a few updates since I've commented on your story. But I really couldn't think of anything to say but "Cool story!" And that would get pretty old pretty quick. So anyway, Cool story! I am enjoying the heck out of your little tale and can't wait for the Super Scoobies to go and kick some demonic butts. I'm just hoping you don't kill Willow off to solve the problem of the Willow/Xander/Tara triad.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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