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Dawn's Domination

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Review of chapter "12" from Harry
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Dawn is finally letting others know WHY she is here! And its interesting. Now, lets see how she handles the rest of the time here.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from Harry
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The fact that Dawn showed that she wished to continue under Lady Heather, after what happened, shows that she has earned respect from the three ladies. The fact that she was put in the van with her face open, and a form of a pacifier that was for adults, shows that she was to be treated better than the others. This proves that she is a step above the others.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from Harry
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Lady Heather just told most of these women off and they EARNED being chewed out! They forgot that while they were to be submissives, they also had to keep their own will as well. And Dawn proved that, while she was being a submissive, she still had the sense to be ready to do what was needed to defend herself.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from Harry
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It definitely looks like Dawn has taken a shine to Sara. Her determination to win and not to cum, proves her willingness to do whatever it takes to prove to Sara that she wants to do her part to serve her.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from Harry
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Ponygirl time! And its not a crime when its Ponygirl time! No lemon or lime flavored drinks for these pony girls! Time to spend some time on the track and see how fast that they can go!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from Harry
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Could it be that Dawn is feeling like there is a bond between herself and Sara? If so, that would explain why she reacts the way she does to her. Only time will truly tell if this is the case or not.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from Harry
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Its possible, as Sara suspected, that Dawn is a natural Sub. It may take Lady Heather to truly find out if that is true or not.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Harry
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Could it be that Dawn has a submissive nature, one that calls out to be dominated, to be controlled? THat is what she is learning and what Sara is going to find out. Who knows, she may end up not only completing the course but working for Lady Heather!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Harry
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Dawn Patrol is starting to get a taste of what its like to be bound in the leather, to be gagged and dependent on someone. Now, to see what, if anything, Lady Heather feels needs to be adjusted or improved on.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Harry
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Well, Delta Dawn is starting to learn her place under Sara's training. And she is starting to ENJOY IT! Now, its time for her to start to learn how to walk as a submissive.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Harry
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Sara, Sam and Lady H training the wannabe's. This should be fun, especially with Dawn in the mix.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Dawn is going to be spending time at Lady Heather's? In full BDSM gear? Buffy would FREAK if she ever found out!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from maxthehobbit
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$5,000 for such very little 'play time.' I would have thought she would get together with Willow, since Willow would likely enjoy the same sort of activities. I've never understood the attraction to 'pony girls,' but I guess it does attract some people. Maybe I would understand it more if it was finished, but not bad as is. LOL loved the bells on the nipples.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from alynambered
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Okay, I just discovered that I missed the last four chapters arrival, so now I'm caught up.
I like this story and WISH you would finish it! :) lol
Review By [alynambered] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from eriktheviking
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A well written and very unusual crossover.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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