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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DamianAzrael
Review:
I liked the story also on another comment down below Jirobu was the weakest of the sound four though he was the most physically strong. Kinimaro (bone guy) was stronger than all four though if a fight was to go down i would vote for Shino as there are bugs (actually larva but still baby bugs are still bugs)(Dermestidae beetle's to be exact) that eat bone add in super ninja powered genetically enhanced bugs that eat bone and Kinimaro would be screwed figuratively and perhaps literally depending on your definition of bone *smirks* I rate the fic a solid 8 as it was well written but Lee's eye's and creepy sunset background freak me out, that and his yelling and youth speeches are incredibly annoying no one can be that happy and optimistic all the time it's disturbing. Ewwww just got a freaky visual of Shino attacking with adult bugs that eat through Kinimaro's flesh and lay larva which rapidly hatch (gotta love genetic engineering) and start feasting on his flesh and bore into his bones to eat his bone marrow (with his ability to manipulate bone and bone material that death could take a while) then as they feast on his bones grow at a rapid pace and burst out of his flesh while he is screaming in agony since you know it's a slow death, just for them to lay more eggs and the cycle repeat until they get into and eat his brain or other organs that he needs. Ew just figured i should share that horrific visual it looks even worse when it's a vivid mental image in color.
Review By [DamianAzrael] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fionfee
Review:
Hilarious. Though I do like Gaara, so it was kinda sad for me too. :P
Comments from author:
I know, but the aim was to showcase Lee. At that time Gaara was a total unrepentent sociopath. Sadly, the analogies of.... THROWING THE BABY OUT WITH THE BATHWATER... or ..... DON'T THROW GOOD GOLD AFTER BAD, do apply. My impression of Gaara at that time, he was a mad dog that needed to be put down. A vet does not hate the mad dog, that he puts down, never the less he puts it out of it's and our misery.

Peace
Review By [Fionfee] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cwolf
Review:
Great, now who will kill the bone guy that Naruto runs past before his fight with Sasuke.

Still a good tale.
Comments from author:
Perhaps Choji could, in the cannon he displayed some serious power against Jirōbō of the sound four (Lee could possiblely handle Jirōbō in that version, before catching up with the others), Perhaps Yamato could deal with him, Shino Aburame is another possiblity.

Peace
Review By [cwolf] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Much more fun than canon.
Comments from author:
Thank You. This was was a plot bunny that would not leave me alone, till I released it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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