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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from malenicks
Review:
Poor Dean how he suffered
He kissed her! *giggles*
...had to re-read stoy...and I'll say no more :D
Review By [malenicks] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Zagadska
Review:
Oh. Em. Gee. The Impala is gone! :(

I just stumbled upon this story and it was a good stumble that I took. Very witty and very entertaining. Can't wait for the next installment.
Review By [Zagadska] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LeaFairy
Review:
Hahaha! Not the impala!!! That's so evil! Poor Dean!!! *giggles* Really fun fic! I loved how awkward Dean was with a crying Willow. Adorable.

I look forward to reading more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from tals
Review:
R.I.P. Impala. If it wasn't so absolutely hilarious, it'd be sad. Poor Dean. Also; I kinda love this story now.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Dean made a strangling sound and Sam rolled his eyes.--------- hahah


“You lost my car Sammy.”--------- haha yeah, time for a drink, I would think so!!!


“Sam?”

“Yeah?”

“Willow can’t talk right now. She’s rambling. Do you know why she called you a thoughtless frog-loving idiot?”

“I left the car unlocked.”

“Again?”

“Yeah, don’t tell Dean.”

“We’ll call you later. Now say thank you Buffy.”

“Thank you Buffy.”
------------------------------ I think you need to make it more clear who says ‘Sam’ right there b/c I got so confused and kept re-reading until I made it towards the end where it says ‘buffy’

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“Sammy how bad is it?”

“Dean, open your eyes.”

“I can’t. Just tell me how bad it is.”

“Dean, I’m sorry.”

“Does it help that I’m naked?”

Dean opened his right eye very slightly. “Liar.”

Willow smiled worriedly. “Should I be here? Do you need brother time?”

--------- Again, with the confusing… Did Willow say that she was naked? I assume so…

WOWO WOW! You killed the Impala. That’s evil, dude. Real evil.

Ummmmm… I loved all the previous chapters but this had none of the previous banter or flirting that I loved… Plus, I got annoyed with trying to figure out who was talking. It felt like you rushed this. :(

Being that, you should know I love this story and premise; I just dislike this chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for all your comments (:
I'll see about making the dialog clearer.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from MissE
Review:
You... You killed the Impala...

Dean is going to need serious therapy now.

Do they have Vengance Demons for faulted brothers?
Review By [MissE] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Greywizard
Review:
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Ohm, that is SOOOOO funny! And yes, I already know I'm a cruel, soulless ba$tard. My family let me in on that secret out a long time ago. ;-)

The only worse that could have happened is for Dean to have been tied in a chair and forced to watch the Impala being stripped. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from gabbygal
Review:
awwww, poor dean.
Review By [gabbygal] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Mcspender
Review:
No please nooo, bring back the awesome glory that Metallicar is, pleaseeee!!!!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from dreameralways
Review:
Another lovely chapter.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
“I don’t know. He just seems like your type. All rugged and do-goodery. Heavy on the protective nature. Kind of depressed a lot.”--- HAHAHAHAH So true!


Gabe approached with his pink camera, every new watcher’s graduation gift,-- Really???? Hahaha

What happened to his car??

So cute!
Comments from author:
In my imagination, watchers don't do watcher diaries so much anymore, they make something more along the lines of a scrapbook, hence the camera.
And I figured the scoobies would get a kick out of giving out embarrassing looking ones, hence it being pink. :)

Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This is great!! And I love that Faith is in charge and our Core Four are out and about!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
ahahaha awesome!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
Sweet!
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from dreameralways
Review:
Looking forward to encounter number 3.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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