Review of chapter "Ritual" from DeepBlueJoy
Lovely. i like your characterization. I understand and feel your Ethan in his widowerhood... and I love your slayer in her courage and insight.
Mourning is very hard.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ritual" from mmooch
Aww, what a nice conversation between Ethan and Buffy. Well, nice might not be the right word, but I hope you know what I mean. I'm glad they weren't fighting or screaming that the other one didn't love Giles as much as they did.
Comments from author:
No, nice isn't exactly the word is it...? But yes, I know what you mean. It works.
I wanted somthing that was a touch...moody, but it tuned out darker than I planed. Yelling, and argueing over a moot point... there's not much point to it...
Review By [mmooch
] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated