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Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from banditdoz
Review:
Wow its like I was their watching it! Excellent more to come soon I hope ;-) Thank you for writing
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from djhardim
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I see possible possible problems with Amanda Waller and Checkmate.

Will the Justice Society be making an appearance?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from banditdoz
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Wooowhoooo update thank you, I love where the story is going thanks for writing :D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from juansiete
Review:
GOOD STORY
Review By [juansiete] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from jimk
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Yeah, I gotta agree with the reviews that say not taking out Luthor for the reasons you give sounds silly. It's not like a smart and capable leader would not start changing his plans anyway as you counter them. It really just comes down to is he an asset to the other side or not? If he is, remove him. If Bane or the Joker were so capable then they would still be capable of making changes to plans and influencing Luthor. If they are not and Luthor is the smartest and most capable then he is clearly a dangerous enemy and logic would clearly dictate taking him out over some obviously temporary advantage of knowing his current plans.
Review By [jimk] • Date [12 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from draconis
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You're falling into the cliche' trap of 'don't take out the leader because it might change things'.

Of course it will change things. That's the whole point.

You cut off the head of the snake; Lex.

AND you take out Nyssa, Bane, and Joker, ESPECIALLY when you know they'll cause even more problems. You don't leave them around to regroup their apparatus.

If there are multiple snakes you take them all out at the same time.
Review By [draconis] • Date [5 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Dragonelf
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I like what you have done so far with the story and I hope we will be able to see you inspired to add more chapters soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Eureka
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Ahh new chapter!
So Some is coming together before they had hoped for huh? At least one person is listening and getting out!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from trongod
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They KNOW Bane, the Joker, and many others are cold blooded, rabid killers - why in the HELL don't they put them down for good? And none of the 'We'd be no better than them' B.S., please; they'd be killing them to SAVE lives - and yes, I include Lex in the 'Better Dead' listings...
Comments from author:
They are taking a more hard view point in this story than just turning them over to the cops like normal, I am sure you noted that however the only time they will kill is if there is no other option. Remember they are not only the protectors of the people but also symbols of hope(razial)
Review By [trongod] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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I stopped watching the show regularly when they started the stones plot. I was able to follow much of this from episodes that I had watched and glad that you were able to recap 4 years of frustrating plot that I would not have cared for so much. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Eureka
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TY TY TY! So happy to see more story. So Oliver makes the costumes...Talia and Bats are going good.
So are they all going to show up?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Eureka
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OK Hoping that you get a new chapter in soon. Haven't been able to review or even see most stories as I lost my info.
Love that he is getting the group together now instead of later! Also glad to see that he is going for Ra's help early too.
MORE PLEASE!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from DarthPayne
Review:
Very nice chapter.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lordamnesia
Review:
This story is fantastic! A timetravel!Smallville is a fanatastic idea, one that I haven't seen before. You sent him back to a good spot, other then all the way back to the begining. Keep up the fantastic work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Eureka
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So Lana begins her magic lessons, and agrees to be a threesome?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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