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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bright
Review:
that's cruel
there better be a happy ending in this somewhere
Review By [bright] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yakuit
Review:
wow strong stuff - and very different!

love it
Review By [yakuit] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ForeverWaiting
Review:
That was heaps cool! Will there be any follow ups?
Comments from author:
Well that's the plan but not right now. I have five more months until I have to take the state board exam. Nothing else to do but go to class and go to work to pay for class.
Review By [ForeverWaiting] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caliadragon
Review:
Jesus! Poor Xander from the one kind of hell to another. I really hope that some one saves him from her. No one deserves to be under that bitches care.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sciphy
Review:
WOW! I so want to read more! is there going to be more?
Review By [sciphy] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NeviDrone
Review:
Uh... It was Okay but I found the way you ended it to be very dissatisfying.
Comments from author:
Well, it's supposed to have a sequel but I haven't gotten around to it yet. Maybe that's why the ending might seem dissatisfying.
Glad you thought it was okay
Review By [NeviDrone] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
That's it?
Out of the frying pan into the fire?
jeez
Comments from author:
There's supposed to be more but I don't have time to devote to it right now. It's not going to be written anytime soon but I guess this part could have ended with more of a bang maybe I'll figure something out at another time.
Thanks for reading though
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chaoskitten
Review:
This sooo needs to have more to it :D This is brilliant.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bex
Review:
You always hurt Xander in the best ways! I'm a evil fangirl
Review By [bex] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nuphar
Review:
No I think the ones you have are detail enough to help people who don't want to read this kinda stuff and not give away to much of the story.
Comments from author:
That's good, thanks for the help.
Review By [Nuphar] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Damn!! Xander went from Walsh to Raina!! The PTB must hate his guts!!
Comments from author:
I know. I love to hurt Xander, I'm horrible. Glad you enjoyed.
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nuphar
Review:
Man that was a really creepy story and sad. I would suggest moving the warnings to the top, I know their spoilers but this one is graphic enough most people will want to warn or You could bold your warning at the top, I would bold and caps lock it because sometimes I don't care about author's note and will skip them. It was very well written though and I would like to read more.
Comments from author:
I've changed them to the top. Thanks for that. Do you think i need more warnings or are those good enough? I want to properly warn people.
I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Nuphar] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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