That was heaps cool! Will there be any follow ups?
Comments from author:
Well that's the plan but not right now. I have five more months until I have to take the state board exam. Nothing else to do but go to class and go to work to pay for class.
Review By [ForeverWaiting] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Jesus! Poor Xander from the one kind of hell to another. I really hope that some one saves him from her. No one deserves to be under that bitches care.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Uh... It was Okay but I found the way you ended it to be very dissatisfying.
Comments from author:
Well, it's supposed to have a sequel but I haven't gotten around to it yet. Maybe that's why the ending might seem dissatisfying. Glad you thought it was okay
Review By [NeviDrone] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
That's it? Out of the frying pan into the fire? jeez
Comments from author:
There's supposed to be more but I don't have time to devote to it right now. It's not going to be written anytime soon but I guess this part could have ended with more of a bang maybe I'll figure something out at another time. Thanks for reading though
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Man that was a really creepy story and sad. I would suggest moving the warnings to the top, I know their spoilers but this one is graphic enough most people will want to warn or You could bold your warning at the top, I would bold and caps lock it because sometimes I don't care about author's note and will skip them. It was very well written though and I would like to read more.
Comments from author:
I've changed them to the top. Thanks for that. Do you think i need more warnings or are those good enough? I want to properly warn people. I'm glad you liked it.
