You know how sometimes people use roflamo to express their feelings? Well... after reading it I had a very much a roflamo moment...
and there is still more to come, story is not finished yet... ^_^
Comments from author:
After I'd Googled. 'roflamo' to find out what it meant I'll say thank-you. I'm afraid Season 7 happened so any plans Dawn might have had for Xander were put on hold permanently...pity really, it might have been fun!
You mean Buffy didn't really dust Spike? Rats! I did giggle when I read: Spike turned to ashes in Dawn’s mouth.
Tom Smith, a fine science fiction filk singer, has a funny science fictionish version of the song. Check his site at: www.tomsmithonline.com for some very funny songs.
Comments from author:
Cheers, I shall do that.
I couldn't really kill off Spike, he was needed for Season 7...curses!
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Lol! I am guessing Buffy is not remembering things from the previous nights when she wakes up in the morning. Otherwise Dawn would have to be coming up with WAY better explanations. Dawn really doesn't perform well under pressure, does she? Well, at least verbally. Next comes Friday and Buffy will know who or what to kill. Lol!
Comments from author:
I think Buffy's repressing rather than not remembering.
Yes, Friday's coming with the big climax...did I really say that?
Cheers, DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
"Bloody hell..." OMG --it was Giles! or maybe ethan rayne .....Does Andrew know Dawn is two-timing him with the watcher? At some point Buffy should accuse Dawn of having one of the above as a boyfriend. Dang. So...that first drink was cursed or something, so she's cursed to get drunk each night? What a poor role model for Dawn she's turning into. I liked the tin can full of bolts alarm system. Dawn will go far one day.
Comments from author:
Y'know you're giving me ideas...I don't know whether anything will come of them but...
CVheers, DaveT.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
I hope it was the spell, but Buffy's IQ now seems to be in the single digits on Wednesday. Lol! With the mental image of Dawn dressed like you described, now I feel like a dirty old man. Well done! Carry on.
If Dawn is ... cohabitating ... with Spike, I hope he has his bike all tuned up because I am not sure how fast a truly ticked off Slayer can run with a gelding knife in her hand. Lol!
Comments from author:
Well, Thursday night is almost here and if you thought Buffy was slow on the uptake on Wednesday...well I'll say no more!
Heh, this should be good. I wonder who Dawn has up there that rides a motorbike... I've never heard of that song before but after a quick google, I can't wait to see what the other nights will be like.
Nice to see a new story from you. I love the song, and its many science fiction filk versions, and look forward to seeing how much more perverted your story will become. Lol!
