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Review of chapter "Unnatural Relations" from DieselDriver
Review:
Now that would be an "Oh Shit" moment if ever there was one.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from loretta
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this was a good story, will there be a sequel?
Review By [loretta] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Matron
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There was a lot of cackling going on when reading this story. All of which were mine.
Review By [Matron] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from JayCee
Review:
I loved this...thank you for a great story. Wish there was more... Take care. JC
Review By [JayCee] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from andromedao
Review:
That was a wonderful story I haven't laughed that hard in a month thank you.
Review By [andromedao] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from mountainelements
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I really liked the idea, but I think that you had trouble portraying your vision of the story. Xander seems to switch to liking Angel a bit abruptly. I'm guessing that you had in your head that this change happened over several months, but it's hard to tell how much of a time skip there is between scenes. I also think that some of your other stories like Whispers of Willow could be improved by putting more time references (Ex. Two weeks later; the next month; In November; etc.)

Again, this is a good story that I enjoyed, but I think the story you were envisioning was even better. Hope this review is helpful.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [7 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Stormguard
Review:
Very nicely done.
Review By [Stormguard] • Date [4 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from darkerxangel
Review:
Totally love it !
Review By [darkerxangel] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Teucrian
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I was a bit leery of the premise at first, but you did an excellent job writing it.
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Undead Unfriends" from jimk
Review:
Well that's disgusting. Was reading this and thought it pretty good until the author decided to turn it into a stupid slash fic. Too bad the author doesn't have the courtesy to list it as such in the description.
Comments from author:
Well, that's disgusting. Was reading the review and thought it was, well, ordinary, as the reviewer obviously didn't read the note about it NOT being a slash fic. One kiss does not a slash fic make. And when I write slash, you'll know about it. Trust me on that.
Review By [jimk] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
or, uh, playing poker with kittens?”--------HAHAHA I love this image. Then Spike not enjoying the idea of snacking on kittens, plus Dru’s words, was hilarious.

You could get stuck in some two-bit town, no money 'cause your car is broken down, and having to bus tables at some ladies strip club until one day one of the strippers breaks a leg, and you have to get up on stage and take it all off for the ladies,” she offered.--------- HAHA

I really like the original way to deal with Angelus & Co. I love the idea of them still being kinda bad but good at the same time.

Lovely story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Dragonelf
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You Did An Excellent Job With This Story.

This story is on my CoA nominee candidate list.

I hope you get inspired to write a sequel to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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- King Solomon
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Comments from author:
Cool! Thank you very much. Actually this was one story that I didn't get an overwhelming urge to write a sequel for. Maybe when I've finished 'Whispers of Willow'. In other words - some decade :o
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Morgomir
Review:
Great ending. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Mordare
Review:
Great job, I will continue to recommend it to others. Thanks for all the fun.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I was having my doubts about this story but the ending totally pulled it together. Nice work!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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