Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from JayCee
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I loved this...thank you for a great story. Wish there was more... Take care. JC
Review By [JayCee] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from andromedao
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That was a wonderful story I haven't laughed that hard in a month thank you.
Review By [andromedao] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from mountainelements
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I really liked the idea, but I think that you had trouble portraying your vision of the story. Xander seems to switch to liking Angel a bit abruptly. I'm guessing that you had in your head that this change happened over several months, but it's hard to tell how much of a time skip there is between scenes. I also think that some of your other stories like Whispers of Willow could be improved by putting more time references (Ex. Two weeks later; the next month; In November; etc.)
Again, this is a good story that I enjoyed, but I think the story you were envisioning was even better. Hope this review is helpful.
Well that's disgusting. Was reading this and thought it pretty good until the author decided to turn it into a stupid slash fic. Too bad the author doesn't have the courtesy to list it as such in the description.
Comments from author:
Well, that's disgusting. Was reading the review and thought it was, well, ordinary, as the reviewer obviously didn't read the note about it NOT being a slash fic. One kiss does not a slash fic make. And when I write slash, you'll know about it. Trust me on that.
Review By [jimk] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Luna
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or, uh, playing poker with kittens?”--------HAHAHA I love this image. Then Spike not enjoying the idea of snacking on kittens, plus Dru’s words, was hilarious.
You could get stuck in some two-bit town, no money 'cause your car is broken down, and having to bus tables at some ladies strip club until one day one of the strippers breaks a leg, and you have to get up on stage and take it all off for the ladies,” she offered.--------- HAHA
I really like the original way to deal with Angelus & Co. I love the idea of them still being kinda bad but good at the same time.
Lovely story!
Review By [Luna] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Dragonelf
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You Did An Excellent Job With This Story.
This story is on my CoA nominee candidate list.
I hope you get inspired to write a sequel to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::
# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # All the rivers run into the sea; yet the sea is not full. - King Solomon # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #
Comments from author:
Cool! Thank you very much. Actually this was one story that I didn't get an overwhelming urge to write a sequel for. Maybe when I've finished 'Whispers of Willow'. In other words - some decade :o
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Morgomir
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Great ending. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Mordare
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Great job, I will continue to recommend it to others. Thanks for all the fun.
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from dogbertcarroll
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I was having my doubts about this story but the ending totally pulled it together. Nice work!
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Consequences, Mark 2" from Angelfirenze
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That WAS unexpected! And so weird. I kind of wish I'd gotten to see what happened in the meantime, but it's very interesting that now Xander calls the Order of Aurelius ala Angelus his true family. I suppose it's more true than not. Anyway, bravo, I definitely enjoyed the ride.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]