Wonderful story. I love the idea of Darla going to the sisters for help. I really love that they were able to get Connor out of that hell dimension after only a few hours. I am looking forward to the next in this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Caliadragon
Review:
I'm so glad that they were able to get Connor back before he was a teenager and damaged further by Holtz. I look forward to the rest of the arcs.
Thanks Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. That was part of the goal, seeing if I could make him *him* without all the damage.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
it's really good so far. i admit, i almost forgot about that challenge. great job, sitting on the edge of my chair (but then that could be because it's broken). either way, keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it. I think I've had that challenge tapped since you posted it, I just hadn't gotten around to working on it. (Honey, buy a new chair! That can't be good for your posture.) And, ah, in my Author's Note I mentioned that this one might become a multicross (Supernatural and Leverage, to be specific). I hope you don't mind.
Review By [Meraculas] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from PrincessTai
Review:
Oh. Piper. I am so very much looking forward to how you play this :-D
Comments from author:
She just. She's not a Scooby, but she should still know better. It should be interesting.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
huh. for a minute there I thought they'd save Darla by having Paige use her remote orbing ability to 'summon' Connor out of her. Oh well! As is, will Angel find out about Connor at some point? I imagine Sahjan will still come after him, there's that whole prophecy about Connor killing Sahjan someday... might send Holtz too. And or when Chris shows up, future-Connor might arrive too. That'd be weird.
Comments from author:
You stumped me there for a second, but I don't think that would have worked out well, so. Dead she is. You'll have to hang around and see! It should be interesting. And sort of weird.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
