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Pool of Blood

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fourmenandanelephant
Review:
Well written, but morally bankrupt because when they find the gun dealer likely illegally who sold that gun years later after he's stayed in business and left a large amount of broken and dead bodies in his wake, Horatio would be morally justified to find the Scoobies and give them pictures of all the victims both dead paralyzed and injured and then walk away into the sunset... Disgusting on a moral level...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I truly enjoyed this story, but it left me feeling so unfulfilled. I wish I knew the why of Buffy being shot, other than just some random shooting. I won't try to tell you how to work your own plot bunny, however if I knew more, I wouldn't be feeling so bereft. And, I won't beg you to write more, because it's obvious you don't want to, so...

Once again, great ficlet. So sad to see a hero go down because of random human evil...
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from andiesimmo
Review:
love this it has so many ways it can go there just HAS TO BE more PLEASE
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Ok you so can not kill Buffy off like that. It is a crime. At least with Glory she saved Dawn. Make her immortal or something cause this is just wrong.

It is well done but I so hate the idea of Buffy dying like that. Plus the bad guy he so needs to be dealt with.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nicowa
Review:
Leave it. It's short, snappy and well written. As it, it has a very powerful impact. I love it.
Review By [nicowa] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Place a warning about major charactor death. Unless you are one of those that like to trick people into reading your stories.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LurkingGoblin
Review:
Totaly awesome, more please!!
Review By [LurkingGoblin] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ozseaside
Review:
yup - thinking I wanna see more...
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from umino
Review:
Interesting. Wouldn't mind reading more.
Review By [umino] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
Not happy. No flashback will fix this and be believable. Your challenge to yourself?
Review By [PATM] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Coldhands
Review:
Stunning.

A series is possible, but it stands just as well on its own.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xanderfan
Review:
That. Was. Awesome.
Loved it.

Beautifully written, short and sweet. Though not pressing charges? I would want to rip them apart.
Review By [xanderfan] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Not bad. One observation -

"Instead, she grabbed the first clean instrument she saw on the tray and dug it into her own arm. With a pained grunt, she wrenched out the third bullet and slammed it into his hand. "

Unknowingly, Faith damaged a major artery in her arm. Later, the artery let go and Faith bled to death.
Comments from author:
Can we pretend that either she didn't dig real deep with her fingers or that it didn't hit an artery?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
Oh Dear!

More please?? Thanks. very good very wrought with emotion and angst but it feels like just a beginning. What possessed Victor the shooter? And why? And does it lead to another apocalyptic event?

With Faith as the head Slayer and last of the Chosen whatever it is might have made a very big mistake.

Inquiring mind wants to know.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Great emotion! When you mentioned Faith it threw me for a moment and diluted the total effect...But still great emotion!
Comments from author:
Oh really? I was trying to go for the sister slayer bond thing, and also because I kind of see Buffy as that role model Faith didn't really have.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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