Absolutely loving this story so far, can't wait for the next chapter. When are their 'biological parents' going to either be involved with the story (e.g. find out about their kids being grown in a lob) or will meet them?
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Okay, so I only just found this story. It needs some cleaning up with spelling in spots, but that's not a big deterrent. The story itself is fabulous and I really do hope you decide to pick it up again and continue. It hurts to see something so fun and good go to waste. Thanks for sharing what you did, but here's hoping for more.
CT.
For Chikageko: The author explicitly stated that Willow did not inherit that particular gift, so anything relating to using said gift would not help them at all.
Review of chapter "Ice Ice baby..." from Chikageko
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Being the scarlet witches 'daughter' as you so often pointed out, Willow has the ability to manipulate probability. Wanda herself manipulated the chance that dinosaurs would spontaniously walk out of thin air in the savage lands amoung a number of other things, including the happenings of MDay and House of M. If Ms Rosenburg has read all the comics as you suggested she'd know this. As such funds would not be a problem for them. Willow could simply alter the probability that their stove would become solid gold and sell the thing to the bank, or a collector. Problem solved.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Come on! I think of this story at least once a month and it has been a YEAR since you last update. Did you really just gave up? Because if you did is such a shame and such a waste of a brilliant plot! =/ Please write more of it, you got a good thing going here, don't give up!
Review of chapter "Ice Ice baby..." from Whimsicality
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I really hope we get to see more of this someday, it's creative and well written and intriguing and I would love to see more of this universe and our favorite characters.
Review By [Whimsicality] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
God, I really miss this story! Seriously! I've read it 3 times already and I can't wait for you to update! Did you give up on it? I've been with this since you first posted and it has been a looong time since your last update.... I hope that you do it soon..... ;*
A realistic, unusual, setting for a BTVS/Marvel fic but you're keeping the story interesting. Some good action, some sweet or sad moments, some funny ones... Very nice writing.
I like how the girls keep a low profile, which makes sense given their past, all the while trying to improve their hold on these new lives/powers they didn't ask for.
Buffy sulks, Faith is... Faith, Willow's insecure and Cordelia 'bitches'. So them. But, nonetheless, I think it's time for some of them to grow up a bit. Mainly Willow and Cordelia who are still stuck-up in their HS/teenage persona. Given their new not so great situation, I'm even surprised these changes haven't occured yet. JMO, of course.
Review of chapter "Here it goes again" from lacthryn
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this is a really great story so far and had amazing potential. i like the way you used an uncommon link to bridge the crossover. the book by Nancy Holden was really good and i liked the way you kept the characters true to that. best of all you have a kept Faith the way she was in the book, which showed more of her personality then anything in season 3. overall can't wait to see how you continue to develop characters personalities, hope you maintain the core of what makes them who they are, and can't wait for an update.
Review By [lacthryn] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ice Ice baby..." from jormunguard
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Great story so far. I like the power choices for each of the girls. The only question I have is the arrangement of Faith's claws. Are they like those of X-23, meaning 2 on each hand and 1 on each foot, or are they a mix of Wolverines and X-23, meaning 3 on each hand and 1 on each foot?
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ice Ice baby..." from KenjaKitsune
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This is awesome! The idea and what you've done with it so far, as well as the great writing skills displayed. I like the super-long chapters and that they flow despite the length. I can't wait to see what you do with this story in the future, and I really want to see the meeting between the girls and their 'parents'.
Review By [KenjaKitsune] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated