wonderful stuff! but how on earth did u think of faith and neville? i think it's absolutely brilliant! i feel sad that they took so long to get together tho!! wished neville had more guts!! FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Aww!!! *sniffles* That was a lovely ending! I'm so glad that Faith and Neville got their happy ever after! Also I really loved the ghostly guest of Buffy, Xander and Willow... Whistler as well. *sigh* Nicely done :)
Really great story with a simply perfect ending!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
But no matter how much he loves her, she’s not really to be trusted---- hahaha
“I’m pretty sure that you intended would have my head on a silver platter if it doesn’t.”--- *your*
Neville gives a wave to Narcissa and Andromeda who are sitting together, the tow-headed Teddy is making noisy airplane noises beside them. His hair keeps flickering between the black and blonde of his grandmother and great-aunt and it is somehow the most natural thing in the world.--- wait, huh? Who is his great-aunt? You make it sounds like his grandmum and g-aunt consist of Narcissa and Andromeda… ?
Malfoy giving her away = awwwwwwwwwwwww
Yay for Buffy, Xander, & Willow being there!!!!!!!!!
LOVED this story. Absolutely freaking loved it.
Comments from author:
This is the universe of the 'Taming of Grimmauld Place.' Remember, Narcissa and Andromeda had healed their relationship at the end of that story? I figure that the sisters would go to Faith and Nev's wedding together. And Andi is his grandma, seeing as how he's Tonks and Lupin's son while Cissa is his great-aunt.
Thanks for pointing the your out, I'll fix that right now.
xoxo for reviewing
Review By [Luna] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Aww, Neville is truly wonderful in this! Sad that his and Faith's friendship was broken up for so long though... But it's definitely understandable with Neville being so heartbroken and hurt. I wonder if Faith knows the real reason their friendship ended, the real reason why Neville stopped talking to her?
Poor Faith too for feeling guilty/responsible for Sirius and well.. anybodies deaths. And Yay, she saved Fred! I adore Fred to bits! I hope she'll be okay though... She and Neville deserve their happily ever after. *nods* lol.
Anyways, this has been a delightful story so far and I definitely look forward to reading more! Thanks so much for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
"Neville wished for the ground to open up and swallow him whole, he wished for the sun to stop shining and the Giant Squid to flop it’s giant body out of the lake. Anything to distract from the fact that he basically called himself a plant pervert.
“Well,” the girl said as she stared at him, “to each their own I guess?”
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oh man, I ruptured a serious gut laughing so hard at this. awesome :)
Review By [yakoba] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Some part of him, the part that’s kept him detached throughout all the St.Mungo’s visits, the part that’s kept him sane through Snape’s potions tells him to turn back. To leave, to close his eyes and turn away. But he can’t, because Neville is a Gryffindor deep inside and he’s never met an obstacle that he’s avoided yet. --- I like how you explain this aspect of NEville's character.
Some part of him, the part that’s kept him detached throughout all the St.Mungo’s visits, the part that’s kept him sane through Snape’s potions tells him to turn back. To leave, to close his eyes and turn away. But he can’t, because Neville is a Gryffindor deep inside and he’s never met an obstacle that he’s avoided yet. --- I like how you explain this aspect of NEville's character.
Some part of him, the part that’s kept him detached throughout all the St.Mungo’s visits, the part that’s kept him sane through Snape’s potions tells him to turn back. To leave, to close his eyes and turn away. But he can’t, because Neville is a Gryffindor deep inside and he’s never met an obstacle that he’s avoided yet. --- I like how you explain this aspect of NEville's character.
I really enjoy your writing style in this story. Everything is so quick and I feel like I am in the mind of a teenage boy struggling to understand this world of his.
Curious about Faith's reaction at the end though..
Luna
Joyful
