Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from calikocat
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Wow, very in depth fic. Liked it muchly. ^^
Review By [calikocat] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from silvergaurd
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love the fic.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from ferball
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"organizing the girls into pods of pummelling mayhem."
Great line in a great story. Wonderful ride & sorry to see it end...
jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from fayannr
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I've really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue writing in this universe. It would be interesting to see how/why Xander gets vamped, how the brother/father relationships work out, if Blair and Jim stay human, etc. I would enjoy reading more.
Review By [fayannr] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from sciphy
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very well done... sorry i didn't review sooner RL got to me and i havent been able to read for a while... loved the yyh ref.... good job! I hope there is going to be a sequel?!
Review By [sciphy] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from SusanAnthony
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I really enjoyed reading this! I hope you write more in this universe. I'd like to know what happened to Xander. And how Johnny reacts to have Blair and Xander as kids.
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from SisterD
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I would love to see a sequel. This was wonderful to follow!
Review By [SisterD] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from kayron
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I'm guessing that Xander is no longer human. With Spike as a mate it was inevitable. Besides Jim wouldn't let anything get at Blair. Good story. Xander ended up with an unusual but good family.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from DarkFaerieYumi
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That was freakin' AWESOME! I loved it! Xander was turned! SWEET!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from Caliadragon
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This was a fantastic story. I like to think that Johnny and the boys caught up and stayed close to each other. Perhaps they helped him with the visions and maybe killed Greg Stillson.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Original Challenge, Author's Note, References" from Neverwillmini
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Overall I quite liked the story, but I felt there should have been at least one more chapter between them leaving the loft and Xander showing up turned a few years later. Maybe some development or discussion between Xander & Spike after they left the loft with the knowledge Spike was a Sentinal. What was going on with his demon? Maybe show some of their travels while Xander is thinking about the fact that he was a Guide to an immortal being and would obviously need to change to stay with him (maybe the girls & Giles' thoughts on that too). I also still want to know just why Xander was given the message to save Spike particularly. Was he or they both needed for something specific?
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I like how you set the ending, you could just leave it here, or you could write the story of how Xander became undead, or you could re-do the who dead zone series, with Xander and blair as helpers, and how that would effect the story, there is so much in this story you could have done, but you didn't stuff this story filled with all of that. I love it and enjoyed this story much.
Review By [LadyLythrum] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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