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Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Jarvey
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I want to thank you. This story is what got me to watch the series, and bear witness to one of the finest sets of episodic writing I've seen in years. I know it has been a while, but I hole you continue writing this story. Recc'd!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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Great story so far and I especially love what you've been doing with Azula. It's an interesting direction to take her and there's a TON of potential for character development inherent in it. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Eureka
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Poor Angel! That must have hurt like hell! Thank Goodness that A was able to help instead of doing as they feared that she would. *GASP* Princess had compassion? WOW I was def surprised at that.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from (Recent Donor)Shieldage
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Awesome. Poor Angel. Makes sense that he'd fall at her hands. Sounds like this will screw up Wolfram and Hart's plans even further.

I'm glad Vampire Willow was trained in elemental spells, good use of Dark Willow's rage/Earth elementals.

I'm glad Azula has had therapy. Good character building.

Ouch. I'm glad Xander has reason to take Azula's advice to heart, but Buffy could easily blame her for not reaching Angel in time, when she apparently could've... Ah. Both halves of that are probably in Azula's situation assessment anyway...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Shieldage] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Klimmatt
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Awesome chapter, I'm glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next one.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Eureka
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So there is no way that Faith may have gotten out alive? :( Is there any way to get Azul to prove that she can be trusted? Or to get the new slayer?

Nice to see you continue the story. Thought maybe you forgot about it.
Comments from author:
With Faith, there is no chance. She's gone which I know make people upset, but it's what happened. I would have liked to keep her, but story wise it makes more sense this way. Is there really ANY way that Azula can be trusted? Not a lot of answers with someone like her.

Thanks for the review, and I haven't forgotten about it at all, or my other story. Just time constraints are really tight. Hope you bare with me!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Drakan
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O.O.......holy poopinator!!! this is getting interesting! gonna show what happens on the avatar world vs the btvs world?
Comments from author:
I think, in the long run, Buffy's world would win. Though if you got more people like Azula fighting them, learning about their world, being kept secreted away...wait, forget that. I said nothing! Hope you like what happens.
Review By [Drakan] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will. In fact, next chapter being sent for beta approval as I type.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Eureka
Review:
OK How did Azula get there? Did she take over Faith since at first she looked like Faith?
Oh well I will find out when you post again.
Comments from author:
I can safely say that no, Azula did not take over Faith's body. Buffy only thought it was Faith at first glance cause she was obscured by fire and she didn't know anyone else was in there. Thanks for the review and hope you like what happens next.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks! There will be more to come if I can get the ideas in my head to form words on paper.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from mountainelements
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I didn't understand what was going on with Azula, but you'll hopefully explain that in the next chapter. I'm not sure if I feel sorry for Faith or not. I'm guessing that she's dead, but she did betray everyone. I didn't really get how she could let Xander go and still keep her contract. Thanks for the update!
Comments from author:
There will definitely be some explaining going on in the next chapter. Lot's of talk, actually. Faith, or at least how I was trying to write her, is kind of conflicted. She did betray everyone, but she isn't exactly evil either. Bad choices born from bad experiences. But, yes, Faith is dead. Letting him go would be against the contract, but only if anyone found out she did it. More explanations to come! Thanks for the review!
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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