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Neville's Summer

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Review of chapter "One Shot" from grouchie
Review:
that was fun I really enjoyed my only complaint would be you left us wanting more. please say there will be I would love to see everyone's reaction will be to the new Neville
Comments from author:
I have a few nibbles from Authors that want to use it and expand on it. If nothing pans out I will give it a shot...I am writing something else right now (the prologue is so far over 4000 words lol) but if nothing from the other authors pans out I will write a story to settle the masses lol Thanks for the review...sorry if it leaves you aching for more give me some time....who knows the muse may bite me on the ass to go ahead and write it all out without waiting just to see if I can do...sorry I am rambling but you get the idea lol
Review By [grouchie] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Shot" from twlight
Review:
Yahoooo good for him. I always felt that Neville is extremely overlooked. I am glad that he was able to have a wonderful summer.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Yea, poor Neville they always make him out to be so clumsy and bumbling. I always felt that, with family members treating him the way they had, it was no wonder he was the way he was. But what if he met Faith. Faith that had this wild side, a predator that can fight but was just as loss as Neville was. People are asking for a larger story but I don't know if I can pull it off and make it...GOOD...you know something you can really sink your teeth into? But I have writers nibbling at it. lol I will wait and see if anyone wants to use it for a larger story...if not I may give it a go...I am working on something else right now. And so far the Prologue is over 2,000 words ha! Thanks again!
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Shot" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
The point of the challenge was the level of difficulty it takes to write a story in drabble format (100 words, no more no less - double drabble = 200, etc.) Shrugging it off and saying oops I went over and don't care doesn't really complete the challenge.
Comments from author:
Maybe but it was still fun to do even if I did go a few words over board. lol thanks for reviewing anyways
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Shot" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Interesting little idea. I always enjoy the image of a BAMF Neville and one trained by Faith would def be hard core bad ass :)
Comments from author:
lol I know I always thought Neville got the bad end of the stick in Harry Potter so when the N came up in the random letter thing I immediately thought of Neville. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Shot" from damascenka
Review:
Good one, I really liked it. Some sequel, one shot about beginning of school year would be nice :o).
Comments from author:
lol Thank your for reviewing the story! It would make a story but I don't know if I am really capable of bringing one to life that would do it justice. If you feel like running with it let me know...as long as you credit me for the Prologue you can use it as you will...I think it would be great for a great author/es to bring a bigger story out of it.
Review By [damascenka] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Shot" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Heh. Cute little one-shot.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much...my first story posted on the site and I get five reviews already...I am gushing with joy! Thank your for reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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