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Review of chapter "Chapter 44" from draconis
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I've enjoyed the detail you've put into this slice of your re-imagined Harry Potter. You do a good job of exposing the motivations of the characters, especially when you change them as in the case of Dumbledore.

I'm wondering about one thing though...in the last 2 or 3 chapters you suddenly started using the name 'Marcus'. Did you mean to use the name 'Martin'? He is the one most recently in the company of Potter's group.
Review By [draconis] • Date [7 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 38" from raxadian
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At this rate Moldy Shorts will not have any good fighters left.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 37" from raxadian
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Domino effect uh?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 36" from raxadian
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Maybe Amos is on the side of the Dark Lord? I mean, that was kind of forced.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from raxadian
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Golem Lily will date someone?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 34" from raxadian
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So unlike the books the protection will not go away when he becomes an adult.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 33" from raxadian
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Wait, so it wasn't blood magic?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from raxadian
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Is that a ghost or a copy, like a portrait?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 31" from raxadian
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Well, well, so Greengrass is the only young being dateless, uh?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from raxadian
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Will he start to get money from the Potter merchandise?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from raxadian
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Oh, things going bad eh Moldy Shorts?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from raxadian
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Well, blood magic is strongest when you sacrifice lives, specially if the sacrifice is willing.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from raxadian
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At this rate he won't have many followers left.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from raxadian
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Yeah, probably. And then you could keep betraying Harry until you got killed.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from raxadian
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One hour? He sure got way too arrogant at his old age.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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