How is she planning on dealing with the fact the visions will kill her unless she gets turned back into a half-demon (or was that demigoddess) like she was in the original timeline?

Probably some strengthening spells that are safer than last time.

A great story, well done and thanks.

Thanks... (yes you wrote this a while ago... the notification got lost somewhere...)

Ah, why isn't this fic on my recs list yet? Oh yeah, that's right, I haven't reread this since I actually started making recs. I must fix that now, so onto the recs list you go little fic. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Thanks for the review. This story was a blast to write.

That was awesome! It may not be the *best* story out there, but it still beats the crazy guys who do nothing but absolute crackfics by a mile. A mile composed of 5280 kilometers (if that even makes any kind of sense whatsoever).

I don't worry about being the best. If I amuse and entertain people with my work then it's effort well spent. I try to avoid the absolute crackfics... though Harry in Vegas... comes the closest that I'll write... to a crack fic.

I love this chapter! Even though I was a *little* OM- *WTF*?! about "Anne", it's still turned out well. I haven't read past the first chapter because I can't actually email you through the site, so I'm using this as a way to ask for your help. What I want to do (that is one of my most pitiful weak suits, which are the opposite of strong suits) is to have a crazy clone of Diana's mother from another universe show up and talk about my main character, the apokoliptian. I want to alude, through words obfuscated to oblivion that she is capable of bending distortion and corruption to her far more pure will and that she can wield all of the non-black power rings, and lastly that she will bring about the recreation of the white power ring, partly through divine intervention, partly due to "divine" intervention ("divine" as in Ares, Eris, Athena, etc., etc.), and partly due to remembering what happened to make a friend real in the universe of her birth. Specifically, the spell that made Dawn Marie Summers real. And that will help to hide the White Power Ring, which (according to the prophecy that foretold it's rebirth) someone tries to corrupt at the source before it's made. And finally, I looked up "obfuscate" to make sure I'm allowed to use it before I wrote it. According to the definition, it is :
Verb
1. Render obscure, unclear, or unintelligible.
2. Bewilder (someone).


last bit of this review: I'm going to continue reading this story. Try to remind me if I forget to review at the end.

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. As for your part about help... I wasn't aware that you couldn't e-mail me through the site... at any rate... I suggest having someone... maybe Zantana use a spell to call up someone with information about the main character. That would allow you to get a couple brief questions answered about her without them being able to cross examine her overly much. As for the divine angle keep it nice and quiet... maybe a hint here or there but nothing overt. As for corruption or distortion... I'm not sure I understand what you're meaning by bending them to her will... she seems to have too many fingers in too many pies... right now. Also if people don't have names they are typically given one. On the part of the power rings... maybe maybe and I mean only maybe mention something about a white ring of light or something... but you're better off just describing her as the type of person that can pull that off... rather than telling... she's sounding a bit like a Mary Sue... I don't mean to offend... but Superman... super flight, super strength... a couple of other things that fall into that... as well as nice guy with a heart of gold... If someone can do more than him... bend concepts of the universe... make the ultimate power ring... do you see what I mean? Superman has had decades... and decades... to get where he is... I would do more showing than telling where her powers are concerned so that you don't get too far off left field with your main character.

Have fun with the rest of the story.

I enjoyed the story, but the whole Xander-becomes-a-girl bit really pissed me off. I'm really all for women empowerment, but for once, I'd like to read an empowering women's fic without it resorting to (in this case, literally) emasculating the main male character in an effort to make the female seem like the 'stronger' gender.

I mean, do you ever see fics where the women have their breasts cut off and are given penises for the heck of it? Not very often, I imagine. Because frankly, it would be ridiculous. So why then are there so many gender-bender fics like this where the guy gets his dick removed? You'd think they'd react a little more strongly to losing their friggin genitals. But most fics like this have the guy freak out for maybe a few hours and then accept it as if they weren't just castrated last night.

BTVS is already filled with enough gender reversal and women empowerment as it is. There was no need for this to top it off.

Sorry for the rant. I really did enjoy the story despite this ridiculous aspect.

I can understand your rant. :) Believe me I happen to agree that you can do a story and empower the female characters without cutting the boys down. There is enough of that in Buffy as it is. That being said, I was going off a challenge and I wanted to see if I could write something that I didn't exactly agree with. (turning Xander into a girl)

That being said, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story despite Xander getting turned into a girl.

An enjoyable read. Thank you very much. My only complaint (if you can call it that) is that I didn't see all that much suffering, despite what the title claimed. Also you kinda jumped through quite a bit of potential story, but I can understand getting tired of a story and wanting to just end it.

Anyways hoping to read more of your works in the future.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The suffering was some (light) emotional suffering... they ended up suffering less than I thought they would. :) Toward the end I was getting a bit tired of people complaining about one thing or another I think. I skipped a bit of stuff I probably could have explored but that's true with a lot of stuff.

I've a number of other stories and I'm still working on things so you're probably in luck for reading more of my stuff.

Trippy fic with great humor. Thank you!

I think it's one of my favorite fics that I've written. Thanks for the compliments.

Yes, a fun story.

And this time I actually remembered to review.

Thank you for the review. It was a lot of fun to write.

ch 11

they found the Antarctic base and had to buy a gate???


ch 12

quite a strange end to this fic.

EDIT: Yes you do, but the Artic Base had it's own gate, or not? Why not use that one?

If you want to go exploring the stars you need a ship or a gate. As for the ending, I probably could have done a bit more with the story.

Very Intersting story to read. I liked it alot thanks.

I'm glad you liked the story. It was a lot of fun to write.

Ah, I for some reason just had to reread this one. Well, thanks for writing such a fun little fic, bye for now.

I'm glad you liked it enough to reread it. It's probably one of my favorite stories that I've written.

Now that was an interesting story.
Giles going as Tony Stark was a pretty cool idea, and I like the wolverine Joyce as well. Jenny as a hellsing vampire was neat as well. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of your other works.

Sincerely

John

I enjoyed writing that story. A bit of tormenting for everyone and some well placed costumes that would help people. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

Ch 6

ahh I wonder what exactly sent Sam running to Jack

ch7

ahh Sg1 on the Hellmouth...fun to be :)

Ch 08

helping the Major now`? I wonder what they plan.

Ch 09

ahh good Glory is taken down and I don't think I want to know Will's plans

It was a fun fic to write.

nice Christmas and good Dawn took the news so well