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Xander de Mianna

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Review of chapter "Spiders and Bank heists, oh my!" from CPTSkip
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I don't know how I've missed this cracktastic story up until now. But I will be watching for updates now. Great fun is being had by all! Have your read any Girl Genius comics? More lovely steampunk madness in graphic form. Lol! Now I want more updates! Please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spiders and Bank heists, oh my!" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spiders and Bank heists, oh my!" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spiders and Bank heists, oh my!" from djhardim
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Good. Suggestion - if Giles' contacts were unable to supply Xander with what he needed, try Willy, the demon bar owner.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spiders and Bank heists, oh my!" from eriktheviking
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Another fun update, with Giles & Willow both visiting Egypt (de Nile), although for different reasons.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tumors and metal" from Difdi
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> “I'll take it out with me tonight, but if it doesn't work it's never going out again.”

And that attitude right there, if it's a Slayer trait, not a Buffy trait, would explain why Slayers never use guns. Not because the Watchers Council hates guns, but because the Slayer instinctively knows they're useless and therefore is never taking them out again, after testing a smoothbore matchlock musket 400 years ago, and discovering it was nearly useless for vampire hunting.

Every Slayer since then might simply KNOW guns are worthless, and avoid them on principle, feeling no need to test them again.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tumors and metal" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tumors and metal" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecies and Metal men" from Vilkath
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Bit disapointed in this chapter with the cliche 'Bad guys know who Xander is, but he has no clue about the bad guy'. Like I said the 'paired halloween costume' bit is usualy more trouble than it's worth. Really pushes the author to simply follow canon to 'get past the boring stuff' way to often. Especialy if the author is dragging the Hero's feet to 'make it a reasonble build up of power', which usualy leaves Xander totaly behind the bad guy. Like here Xander barely has a walker while Warren has robo men, a base, materials etc.
Comments from author:
Believe me, he jumps ahead in the next chapter. And his walker will be up very soon.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
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Not a bad idea, but i have my worries about the people other than Xander being changed. Honestly most Halloween fics that alter more than one kid in a major way usualy fail. Especialy when their some one like Waren, who are just there for the express purpose of causing the new Xander trouble. I really hate how they almost always have no problems in their rise to power while Xander hs friends, family and the goverment to worry about. Most fics like this give a 'free pass to instant power' for the bad guys, while Xander or the hero has trouble looking for parts, money etc.
Comments from author:
"I wish there was Timonium in this dimension." Said the Doge.
Xander will actually have less trouble as he has a machine shop and a ready supply of raw materials Warren doesn't have. The Doge had the upper hand at the beginning of the Rise of Legends campaign, but lost it after the prison break mission.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecies and Metal men" from Bobboky
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very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecies and Metal men" from Morgomir
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Don't worry, you've got all the time in the world. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forging" from ArjaiH
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Each short chapter is better than the last. Good work! please go on.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forging" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forging" from Thedruid
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Good story, but it's following old and very well tread YAHF formula, with less charcter interaction. No real surprises or anything. Not much charcter developent either. Utterly below mediochre.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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