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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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ohaa I guess a few ppl will wish soon that they never heard the name Xander Harris.

Chapter Two

ahh I'm surprised X let him live *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordSia
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Huh. And I was so certain Xander would take either A) a shovel, B) a rusty spoon, or C) the Fork Of Truth! And then go hunting Andwews...
Some of the imagery I had in mind would've made the Scourge proud. Then I read the second chapter, at which point Angelus would've been green with... Envy. Yeah, lets go with that. Envy.
Good Luck escaping (make that surviving) the One Who Sees, Andrew. Especially once he rats you out to Willow the Wicked Witch of the West, and the other Slayers...
*Shiver*
Good Luck, you dirty ****, you'll need it in order to die.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
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A bit unclear for me as to the character at the start but well written especially the attack on Andrew but it seemed to lack a purpose overall as though the chapter was incomplete.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kayron
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So he 'felt his divinity wrenched from him' huh? This is Andrew feeling god like? So...what? He felt all powerful so he beat the crap out of Dana? She may be a slayer, with the strength and possible destiny, but she is also someone who has been helpless and has severe mental problems. She's vulnerable. Why did Andrew hurt her? Andrew said that Dana was dangerous and threw him into a wall. She wasn't in her right mind when she did that. It gave him no right to torture her, like the man who murdered her family did. I hope Xander can help her, and do something about Andrew.
Review By [kayron] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
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I thought I knew what was going on in the first part, but this update, while well written, confused the heck out of me. Please write more as I really would like to figure out what is really going on.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
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"I told Andrew that it was a bad idea to bungee jump at night," she said (with a slight quiver of her lower lip and a tremor in her voice). "But he wouldn't listen.."
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Lady
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Very nicely done. Hard, brutal and thorough. Smack-down part one complete. I look forward to seeing where this is headed.
Review By [Lady] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Greywizard
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I'm not quite sure whether this is all some sort of hallucinatory dream Andrew is having or whether he was actually experiencing everything described, but either way, he's getting off entirely too easily if he did take advantage, either emotionally or - worse - sexually, of Dana.

I would expect Xander to destroy him - emotionally and physically - for allowing Dana's situation to degenerate to the state it is in, currently, and if he was the one actually responsible, as opposed to merely following orders and doing so, then the punishment would be much more severe.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from twlight
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If Andrew had anything to do with how this new slayer is then he got off really really really light, I have to wonder how long it would take for Buffy and Willow to do something to him when they find out. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this so far wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Sandi
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Xander let Andrew live? Why? That level of torture and abuse deserves the quick death all mad dogs should get. Okay it deserves worse but not doing the same thing in return is why we are good guys instead of bad ones. Dana needs to be healed, mentally as well as physical, but she may also need to be 'retired'.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gulanticus
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Batman? or a delusion induced Andrew?
Review By [Gulanticus] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MagnusXXN
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Hope to read more soon. And are you implying Andrew took sexual advantage of Dana? Cuz that'd be so fucked up. I dunno what everyone thought when they saw her on Angel, but it was pretty heartbreaking from my pov. Write more soon.


): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
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*sing-song tone* Andrews gonna get it. Little turd. I never really liked him he's so so *shudder* I'm a nerd and I wanna deck him bad. How dare he do this to a Slayer. It's a Watchers duty to watch after and care for a Slayer when they come their way. And here he leaves Dana chained and caged. Little BASTARD! *stomps off grumbling* Please describe or at least leave a brief description of Xanders "talk" with him.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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Chivalry ain't dead and it can have painful consequences.

Great setting!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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