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Review of chapter "Faith" from cindylee
This is actually one of my favorite stories, I find myself going back to read it.
Review By [cindylee] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith" from Jaylynn
More soon? Missing this story.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith" from twlight
Wonderful. I love what Faith said to Spike if he hurt Xander, I also love what Spike said to Xander. I am looking forward to seeing if you have Faith interact with the students, that would be fun. As always I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story
Comments from author:
i'm sorry to say that it might be a while cause i'm having a bit of writers block
Review By [twlight] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith" from zafaran
{snicker} This is *so* going on my ebook reader when it's finished. I like the way you're layering the humor in while making the girls more interesting than I've found them in the other St. Trinian's fanfic crosses I've seen. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
Review By [zafaran] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith" from eriktheviking
Great writing but I'm not sure about the story's direction. Hope the fun starts up again.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith" from LNR

----Happy Dance----

Yeay, another Chapter!
More Please!


~~~lol, I had to type this twice because I used code by accident.
Review By [LNR] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oopps" from xwinterangelx
dont ever let anyone get you down! especially b/c of your stories. you're a wonderful writer with a lot of creativity! please update soon! and dont worry! you may lose some fans b/c of the xander/spike pairing. but u've def. gained a lot more! i know the main reason i read this story was b/c it was a spike/xander! I'll be keeping a special eye on this fanfic =D update soon please! oh and is there a reason spike is such a sub? his normal attitude isnt there.
Comments from author:
the reason is because of how cute i think it is and also because he is in love and when he is he gets all mushy. i'll try to get him more in character now
Review By [xwinterangelx] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It Begins" from GiantMonkeyMan
I dislike how you trivialise rape, using it as a fickle plot device merely in your hopes to make Xander appear heroic and a veritable 'white-hat' in the eyes of the students. Not only that but you make a (admittedly minor) side-character's only response to a bad employee-employer relationship to be raping the employer's daughter in the middle of her school grounds.

It seems a ridiculous addition to an otherwise average fic. Sorry if I seem blunt.
Comments from author:
Okay you did have a point with the first bit of that but Chelsea is not related to Camilla Fritton. Annabelle is related to her and she is head girl. Chelsea is a Posh Tottie. i know the rape was stupid but i couldn't come up with a different idea at the time. but after that got done i thought i did alright. oh well, whatever. thanks for the criticism
Review By [GiantMonkeyMan] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spike" from Cathaign
This latest installment was sorely disappointing. I have no problem with slash; I enjoy reading it if it is well written. However, this popped up out of nowhere, and made little sense.

I also went and watched both of the latest st. Trinian's movies, and there were a few errors in the fic that I feel I need to point out.
1. The movies are very clear that they don't have goths at their school; they have emos.
2. The whole "Xander having to explain sex" thing makes the girls seem far more naïve than they were portrayed in the movie.

Please do not take this as a flame; take it instead as constructive criticism. All authors, fan writers or professionals, benefit from hearing good and bad things about what they write because it can spark an idea or point out where to flesh out more of the story.

I think you should keep the slash, personally, because you enjoy Xander slash and it's your story, but develop it and flesh out the backstory in the earlier chapters to make it believable.
Review By [Cathaign] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oopps" from ora
Try to think of flames as people feeling passionate about your writing. I like the story and I would call it extremely slashy anyway.
Review By [ora] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oopps" from slytherinwithwings
Ignore all the bad people, luv, they just can't handle the hotness that is Spike and Xander. And I haven't reviewed, but I've been avidly reading. I know nothing about the crossover fandom, but I'm enjoying it. Keep it up!

Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oopps" from sabrielemrys
i guess i should've written a review when i first started reading it. heh. never crossed my mind tho. chin up love! cuz i love the story! i'm tracking it as we speak *shhhh* huntin for a wascally wabbit by the name of plot bunnies. =]
Review By [sabrielemrys] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oopps" from shinafirestar
Thank you for continuing the story, I really like it so far. GO YOU!!!
Review By [shinafirestar] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oopps" from Dragonwolftiger
Great story, don't let anyone tell you different. Willow or Dawn would be my guess as to the next character. Please continue as able.
Comments from author:
your the second person to mention those two and as so the second to be wrong. those two are to soft
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oopps" from ChevronIce
Errr, you are still continuing this, right? Just checking, because the story is currently marked as "complete" and I really don't want it to be complete. I'm enjoying this, even though i still haven't got around to watching 'St. Trinians' yet.

Oh, and F.Y.I? This story makes me laugh (The girls betting on how long he'd stay) and cry (Xander's girls dieing and Spikes guilt) so if you finish this before the story is ready because of some jerks I will haunt you until you at least email the complete story to me. Just so you know.

Comments from author:
don't worry i'm not done i just need to fix that next time i update which should be either tomorrow or the day after
Review By [ChevronIce] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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