Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Buffy Skywalker

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Old Friends" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I'm glad you decided to revive this one. I enjoy Floundering-Father!Vader. And Obi-Wan's arrival. Waiting for more!

CT.
Comments from author:
I can only try. I'll see what else I can come up with *cheeky grin*

I'm glad that you're having fun.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Old Friends" from justapiranha
Review:
I have held off reading this for awhile, but still love where you are taking it. I just hope it doesn't take so long for your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Sorry. *sheepish* I lost the thread. Maybe I'll be able to keep it this time.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Old Friends" from bradsan
Review:
Yeah an update and a good one also. I can't wait what will come next.

Curious what Palpatine thinks of the twins and how much Buffy can do before he loses his patient. And if you do Sunnydale, which I'm not hoping for, I hope you let Vader and Obi wan go with them. I really hope this will be one story without the Scoobies.

I also would love to see how the twins learn to fight and get their own light-sabers. I also hope they will start sooner then later learning it. They will be stunning when those two learn to fight.
Comments from author:
Never planned on a sunnydale or really any scoobies. What I did & still plan on is screwing with Palpatine. *smirk*
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Testing the Waters" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
Hai-loooo! Here's a suggestion: I read a graphic novel whose main character was one of the crimson guard, Palpatine's own. He and a buddy were trapped and fighting for their lives after all the others in their group had either died or turned on them, and he ended up being the one to live. Basically, what I'm getting at is, make Palpatine dislike something and order Luke's and Buffy's destruction, and then make Vader be knocked out on the transport of Buffy's, Luke's, and Bolt's before it takes off without proper coordinates in the Hyper-Drive's computer and crash-land on Earth.
Specifically, Sunnydale, California!
Mehehehehehehe. I am EVIL WITH A CAPITAL V!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Comments from author:
I haven't gotten to that point yet and I very much doubt that they'll make it to earth much less sunnydale but nice thoughts. I'll keep them in mind. As to the story blurb you sent me? I haven't gotten around to going over it yet so keep your shirt on squirt! And quit calling me in the middle of the night! You'd think that you being my relative might get you to remember that there's a major time difference between our locations!
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Testing the Waters" from Vickzie
Review:
Cool story!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it so far. I'm sorry its on hold. I'll try to dig up another chapter.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Testing the Waters" from bradsan
Review:
Tell Musey it's a shame not willing to pay attention on a story with so much potential and is so much fun reading.
Glad you updated. love it, good writing. oh and they will be well protected thats for sure. Palpy has to watch his steps when he tries to punish them. "LOL"

And why do I have the suspiscion that the numbers off protectors will grow where they gone live.

Please don't wait to long for the next update that would be cruel. oh and forgive me if I wrote something wrong, English is not my first language.

edit: well, you're doing a great job so jou can be proud off yourself.
Comments from author:
you have no idea. I grew up hearing and learning English but because I'm a type of autistic My brain doesn't register it as my first language. So in a way we're in the same boat. At least you have another language equivalent. My brain doesn't have one and it can be difficult to translate. I don't think in words I think in sounds, pure concepts, individualized symbols, math mathematical calculations, and other. The Other humans don't really have a word or any kind of descriptor for, its been misunderstood for centuries and has gone by many names; among them are life force, energy force, ESP, psychic abilities, magic, shamanism, mysticism, and so many more. As writers it actively and to a certain extent directly manifests as our muses and the characters within the stories that we portray. There is magic, adventure, and miracles all around you. All you must do is look with an eye to see. When you look at an animal or an insect or really any kind of creature, big or small, scary or cute, remember what all it takes for that being to even ^move^ what with how all of the pieces must fit together so exactly and remember how it fits so perfectly within the niche that it lives within both in the past and in the world today. Now take a step back and look at the memory of the part of the wholeness of that being and tell me that you don't see a miracle, that you don't see an active manifestation of what we channel when we need to survive beyond our limits or what we tap when we wish to create and craft. Look, really look, and then tell me what you see. Language is just another miracle that isn't always fully understood whether it is the one we consider our native language or not.

~G
Review By [bradsan] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Testing the Waters" from cryefourme
Review:
Cute. I like the marker Idea...
Comments from author:
*snicker* I'd remembered about needing to mark a CD I'd burned for my sibling special and thought "why not?"
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Testing the Waters" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Thank you, Genuka for this update!! I think it's rather humorous to see Buffy and Luke as very young children!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was getting such plantive requests to add more and I'd ^finally^ gotten my muses to stop hording what it had on anything and everything that I thought I might as well try dangling this story in front of musy like a carrot on a stick and see if it would take again.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Names" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Hmmm! Intriguing little story. Thanks for writing it, author! And perhaps you can be inveigled to return to this tale and keep writing about it?
Comments from author:
maaaaayyyybe. Frankly I only ^just^ got my muses to let me post the stuff they've been hording for the insane guide so no promises but I'll look over the story real quick while I've got their attention and see what they're willing to give me.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Names" from bradsan
Review:
I read this story a few times and I still like it. Can't wait when they gone meet Palpy. He is so gone get it. They will drive him nuts and he will like them for it to. I think.
I like the way you let Buffy and Luke interact. Luke is still on the background but not unnoticed. So those two will bring things alive where they gone live. Hope you'll update soon,
Comments from author:
I'll try to go over it tomorrow and update it a bit but no promises. I'm glad that you've enjoyed what you read so far though.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defensive Shopping" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
quite interesting so far of to ch 3 *g*
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I'll get back to writing this .... eventually.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Names" from darkplayer
Review:
Great start to the story. I like the whole Vander knows about his children plot. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately for the time being this story is on hold. I'm having some medical and money issues I've yet to work out. Thanks for reviewing and for the interest. I'll do my best to write a new chapter and post it soonish.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Names" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Okay. I've gotten over the very funny ending of the third chapter, and an now giving a real review. Four-year-old Buffy is priceless. I can imagine the girl who grew up to be the Slayer in canon being a brazen little spitfire. Shy!Luke is about what I'd expect, too. He definitely had the sweet farmboy thing going in Episode IV. I do think that Vader's a bit out of character, though. At the very least, Anakin never had this much emotional control - which is what led to his ultimate downfall, and having been born a slave himself, I SERIOUSLY doubt he'd have even thought twice about killing that merchant on the spot for insinuating that he'd engage in slave trading with Vader. More likely, he'd have disposed of the fool, and then attempted damage control in the form of trying to make his children understand that he'd been protecting them from the bad man who had wanted to harm them. He may be trying to be a good father, but that's not likely to change his nature as a person.
Comments from author:
Hmm... good point. I hadn't thought of that. As to his control... they kinda had to learn that at the jedi temple in the first place and he had already reached the rank of knight so that, in my mind, meant that he'd proven that he had control and the techniques to ^be^ a jedi knight.

Besides when he was younger he had to control his temper and not lash out 'cause he was a slave and there was little to no protection for him in that position.

Another thing. Can you honestly believe that some of the others think that they're 8 or 9? ^Not^ the 4 that I hinted at. You can maybe fudge 5 or 6 due to travel distance and time but 8 & 9? I mean really people! Come on! Pay attention! .... Sorry about the rant... You're one of the reviewers that actually gets me. Odd how that can be huh? Thanks for the review and the help. =D
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Names" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
just might be in over his head. *snerk* perhaps... maybe... a little bit... *falls on the floor laughing*
Comments from author:
Glad you like it so far. I'm a bit stumped on this story just now. It's slow going but I'll get there eventually.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Hidden Twins" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I find myself quite enjoying this take on Star Wars. I love how Buffy interacts with Vader. If she's this snarky and defiant at this age, I suspect that Darthy is going to have major fits when Buffy is a teenager and even more defiant and snarky.

If you do change Buffy's name- I read it on previous stories- but I liked either Lissa or Eli (pronounced Eelee or just as Ellie, you decide. But I like both pronunciations, however, I'm weird like that. Just so you know). Luke definitely needs more development, because as it stands now, Buffy is totally outshining him in personality at the moment.

And Buffy being obnoxiously annoying to old Palpy just to watch him have a funny aneurysm after having to deal with her would be cause for laughs o'plenty. BTW, this is for the whole story so far...
Comments from author:
I understand about Luke. I just can't seem to catch his character for some odd reason. It'll come to me. It doesn't look like I'll be changing Buffy's name. When I tried she threw a fit and Luke is fun to tease. Right now I'm going with shy Luke but eventually he'll come out of his shell. Palpy is definitely gonna have problems with Buffy though. Mwahahaha!!!!! Me's evil!!!!

And Vader... Oh, boy. When she gets older he's gonna be having some serious problems even if he figures out how to deal with them.

The name thing was really just a way to try and figure out what to call Vader any way, but it's gotten interesting results from both the readers and the characters so I may continue to dangle that possibility.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 4 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking