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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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I've read the E. E. Knight series and enjoyed it, but I admit I was thinking it was John Ringo's Ghost, Mike Harmon, aka Mike Jenkins, aka The Kildar, when I opened this page up.

Not bad, though; hope you continue this someday.
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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Xander went as David Valentine, right? Interesting crossover with Vampire Earth. I hope you write more of this story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Weaver
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Well this is defintely a first, although I suppose that the Vampire Earth books aren't all that crossover compatible. Definitly not super Xander, he may have got a boost with regards to physical abilities and a fair bit of useful knowledge shoved into his head but David was still human, with the flaws that go with it.
Review By [Weaver] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OdinMage
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Vampire Earth, cool.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ronneem
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I have read three books in this series, I think there are four out there. My favorite is Way of the Cat. I hope you continue as I've liked the bit you posted here. Xander as both Cat and Wolf is definitely interesting, but fitting. After all hyena is classified as closer to dog than wolf but with definite cat-like behaviors. Cheers
Review By [Ronneem] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from david
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Vampire Earth right?
Review By [david] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from animesam
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great start
not only have u wrote something i would like to read more of you also gave me something else to read:
Vampire Earth
Review By [animesam] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
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I love extra abilities from Halloween stories, so I'd enjoy seeing this continued. I have to pose the question of how this wouldn't be a super Xander story? He wouldn't be Joe average normal human anymore. He would have enhanced abilities. Those mentioned already are speed, agility, and enhanced senses. I have never heard of the Ghost character before. I don't know if there would be any more abilities coming. But, even if he isn't shooting death rays out of his eyes or something what he can do so far is pretty good, and would be considered super, because typical human Xan didn't have these abilities.
Comments from author:
Super Xander stories tend to be stories where Xander is so powerful that he doesn't need the gang to carry on fighting. Ghost is a scout/spy, (at this point in the books) therefore will match Buffy in some things and not in others. He will stay in the group, and will not get any more abilities. Hope that answers your questions. Glad you enjoyed.
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
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Very well done. I haven't seen many (I mean any) crosses with these books. Love the books. and Val in Sunnydale. with his determination to see things to the end. God I almost pity the bad guys.

I do hope you have more of this. and again great job.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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A well written and interesting opening as well as a crossover I've never seen before (Vampire Earth series by E E Knight.)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zabby
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Good story. never heard of the crossover you used before, but i am very interested in learning more about it. i hope you continue the story.
Review By [zabby] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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Good start. It is interesting that Xander has the reflexes but not strength. As you say this should help you stay away from Super!Xander Hopefully a complementry skillset for Buffy's Slayer powers.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
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.... MORE PLEASE!!!!

Admittedly I am unfamiliar with the universe you crossed it with though you gave enough clues.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
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Interesting.
Review By [twlight] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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