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Review of chapter "Stolen" from bradsan
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aww come on please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stolen" from Vickzie
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Ooh there's a lot of unresolved issues there lol. Please update more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stolen" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
I think i like this story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen" from vaguilera
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Yay!!!! love this fic beta or no beta. please continue and make our summers joyful and eventful. X)
Review By [vaguilera] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stolen" from bubble
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i love this story its an idea that matches so well and yet ive neveerread one so far.
1 Q is micheal dead yet or not cause me is confused but other than that me loves it so much.
please continue this story because its know one of my fav's.
XxXx
Mwah
Bubble
Review By [bubble] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen" from aidensmom
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seems good to me, but maybe you can background to this. such as go into more detail with what happened to buffy and her brothers
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen" from AllenPitt
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Buffy is centuries out of her time, has no idea what's happened since. Needs more exposition for her. Maybe if she asks more questions? Or there's a "one week later, after she's acclimated". This kind of reminds me of when Holtz arrived in the present and they spent part of an ep seeing him watching multiple monitors on history bringing him up to speed...
Huh. presumably B. was a slayer & killing off vampires made her family unhappy... and as the 'first' slayer...that means like the other siblings, she could create more of 'her kind'?
Too bad she doesn't know more, she might be able to contact the current slayer(s) for help?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeker" from PowerStealerRogue
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This is a really cool idea. I,can't wait to see what you come up with.
Review By [PowerStealerRogue] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen" from lunoluidina
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awsome story going almost as fast as id like it to go
Comments from author:
=p

I try..
Review By [lunoluidina] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stolen" from blueyes
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Well, make the whole next chapter a memory/flashback of what made Alexander Corvinus lock his own daughter up. Why did he feel Buffy was a threat? Did she believe her brothers should do the things that they did? How is Buffy the first slayer? Is the slayer line still mystical then? Or is it truly an genetic legacy?
Comments from author:
Are you a mind reader??

And yes, I would try my best to answer the questions in the next few chapters..
Review By [blueyes] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen" from eriktheviking
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Or maybe he was just a father who objected to her dating habits?

A well written and interesting update, thanks.
Comments from author:
*snorts* Dating habit..

Well, Canon Buffy did have bad dating habits...
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeker" from blueyes
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I give this a ten for the original idea. I love the crossover. I always wonder about a sister for the brothers. Buffy, of course, is an excellent choice. I wish you could keep Lucian alive for her.

Well keep at this story please. I will review as often as you post a chapter.
Comments from author:
I will try my best to update my stories at least once a day or maybe once every two days. But, I am afraid that the story length will not be that long; unless I am in an exceptional good mood to write, I'll try my best to make it as long as I can?

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [blueyes] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeker" from eriktheviking
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An interesting concept but you need to explain how Buffy is Elizabeth. Looking forward to developments, thanks.
Comments from author:
I will try and explain everything in the story; anyways, Elizabeth is Buffy's real name, the name that Alexander gave her. But after her father....

Okay, I can't say anymore or the plot will be revealed.. But, you just gave me a great idea!

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeker" from AllenPitt
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So she's the First Slayer (interesting idea)... so presumably she was around for a while before being imprisoned in the cave; and somehow she passed on her ability to another? Kind of a "still alive, can walk in the sun, but all the powers of a vampire" deal? Are slayers "only one a time, one dies the next is chosen?" Or are they all her descendants?
ie acknowledging she's the First slayer implies she knows there were others after her....
Selene must really be desperate to go B. for help.
Ooh---is there a watchers council that manages the slayers? How would it react to hearing that the First Slayer was free? Probably not well....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeker" from spygrrl
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There are not enough Buffy/Underworld crossovers. I love that you are writing one. I think this was a good start, enough that I am curious to continue reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I hope that my following chapters will keep your interest long enough until I finish it!
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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