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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Don't you just hate an UNANNOUNCED apocalypse? I mean, how rude! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Rich
Review:
I like this more mature version of Faith; still a wild child, but able to act the role of the professional LEO.

(And how many stories are you juggling now, anyway ?)
Comments from author:
8 I think...
Review By [Rich] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Nice!

More please.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from BellJarette
Review:
Nice to see you pick this one up again.
Review By [BellJarette] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from AllenPitt
Review:
Nice to see a Faith/Doc Savage crossover. Not a lot of those. Nice use of the supermachine pistol. Does he have a vest with all the goodies?
Comments from author:
See Chapter Five.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Rich
Review:
I'm a little embarrassed to admit that I'd almost forgotten about this one. I'm glad to see that you haven't, and I look forward to more. Faith makes a great Marshal.
Comments from author:
New Year resolution for 2014. Finish at least two more of my 'On hiatus' stories.
Review By [Rich] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from DianeCastle
Review:
Kewl! It's like all your old, unfinished stories suddenly got big prompts right in the keester. Great! I look forward to seeing what else appears in the queue.
Comments from author:
New Year resolution more like it :)
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from starwolf
Review:
you have a really good premise going here. I look forward to when you can write more.
thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Jiltanith
Review:
Don't stop there, please!
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from trongod
Review:
Finally, a Doc Savage crossover!!

OK there's one with Xander in the D.C. 'verse and training Activated Potentials with Pat Savage and Lamont Cranston, but still...

Nice to see Faith is doing her thing as a Marshall; lots of autonomy that she would enjoy, with the back-up waiting for when she needs it.

More, please!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Inoeth
Review:
This is an interesting and amusing story

My biggest complaint is that you make Faith's seem unable to speak proper English. In the TV show, she spoke without all of the odd ways of pronouncement that you have- she simply used a slight Boston accent and added the occasional word such as 'yo' to the end of her sentences when she was younger, and far less so in the later seasons of Angel or in the last season of Buffy. I suggest you watch the bits of season 7 of Buffy with Faith in it so that you can more properly show how she acts and speaks.
Comments from author:
She's exaggerating her speech patterns so that people will underestimate her.

I'm from South Boston originally so I talk like the way I write Faith.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from dcarson
Review:
Hope you come back to this when the muse strikes.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [12 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from ScorpioP
Review:
The over-use of 'dialect' by Faith is the only down-check on this so far. I am curious to see where this goes, so keep writing!
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Hecatonchires
Review:
And finally you let the name out.
Comments from author:
Had to do it at the proper time.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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