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Review of chapter "Disneyland" from liit
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it's me again...sorry, forgot to tell you...you kind contradict buffy's character. you described buffy as compassionate especially when she's soothing anita but you contradict that when faith said that buffy is not trustworthy with children (isn't that faith's character, she's not really big on taking of children, considering buffy raised dawn). just wondering, it is not a flame review or anything, i just thought i'll point it out and hopefully this is not a buffy bashing. I don't mind if faith is the main character, but i think faith and buffy worked their past that they can passed whatever animosity they have and it seems like the way you set your story, faith and buffy are roommates. anywa'z i better get going before i start jabbering again.
Comments from author:
It s in no way a Buffy Bashing and i dont mean to imply she cant take care of a kid, just that she's pre occupied, or something. Faith isnt the main character Anita is, Faith and Buffy have equal parts, like i said i wrote this a LONG time ago lol, and it isn't even part of the story because i did write another chapter that took it's place because this one had holes. Hush Little Baby is a story i answered for a challenge Anita is four or five or something, it would make more sense if you read that one, she's still Anita, with pieces of a child sticking out.As always i love to hear feedback whatever the kind, thanks for the review.

Ali
Review By [liit] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Disneyland" from liit
Review:
Well the story thus far is good and I think the idea is brilliant. Anita being a teenager, i'm assuming in the scoobie universe is actually doable. Would she curved her anger issues and learn to focus how to use that anger and learn compassion from the scoobies that not everything is black and white. I guess what i'm trying to say Anita always wants to feel dominant all the time. what about her necromancer (will the scoobies object to that co'z u know raising a zombie are big no, no to them, especially guns ( scoobies are a bit more against the gun because of what happen to Tara and Buffy--just wondering)...i have many questions but I think I'll just wait till you pose your next chap...by the way love part, where faith mentioned disneyland to anita scenerio is cute...made me smile.
happy writing
Review By [liit] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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