This is a wonderful idea. Kitiara is one of my favorite DL characters, and this just seems to fit. I'd like to see Kitiara's opinion of Oz the Werewolf, though, as DragonLance isn't too easy on lycanthrops.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Not to bad a start for this and I definitely like the possible Xander/Buffy that you threw in there, can't wait to see what Kitiara's reaction to the ensouled corpse will be. I did find it a bit off that Kitiara would know what adoption papers would be and her easy acceptance of modern technology but I'm will to chalk it up to Joyce explaining things to her. Still very good story and I am definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! Update soon! -AlastorGodofVengeance
Review By [Alastor] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Finally another chapter! And finally Kit shows, why she is dangerous. Will Xander 'return' to Krynn? And how will a 'good' Kitiara change the War of the Lance?
ok I may have wrote part of this chapter but I still think you set it up very nicely, and I cannot wait to see what you come up with for the next chapter(razial)
Comments from author:
ahh me neiter, but you know my lazy butt...so it will take a while
Review By [Razial] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
ok now that was a good update, I liked the way you introudeced Xander and girls to Katira. Kinda funny to see Xander's reaction to the news he really is not related to the Harris's. Can't wait for more keep it up
david
Comments from author:
tx for reading raz and who would be relived to not be related to TH?
Review By [Razial] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wow I haven't read those books since forever... And I'm still missing the third story of the ones I did read. Sorry you just got me thinking of them with this story. It seems like an interesting story but I think xander seemed to trusting. Still want to see more of this though...lots more.
Comments from author:
ahh if you start to read the last story of them then now because of my humble story, that's the best gift u can give me and yes he seems kinda trusting, because his biggest wish seems to become true, but don't overlook that the next talk will be in the same room with adults he really trust.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Well, that's one way to keep Kitiara from taking up the cause of ol' Tacky.
I do see her thumping Caramon whenever he gets too deeply into the ale after this, however.
Gods only know how Raist is gonna take the story, however..
Thanks for this and keep up the good work.
(As most gods can only grant spells up to 2nd level in planes they are not venerated, it does make sense that any blessed object shy of an artifact will take longer, but get the job done, so the way you handled the ashen demise of Carlos works. Just saying..)
Comments from author:
thank you for enjoying it so far and yep that sounds good with th 2nd lvl thing
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated