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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Netchka
Review:
More coming soon? I hope so, good story. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DireSquirrel
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This is a wonderful idea. Kitiara is one of my favorite DL characters, and this just seems to fit. I'd like to see Kitiara's opinion of Oz the Werewolf, though, as DragonLance isn't too easy on lycanthrops.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Alastor
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Not to bad a start for this and I definitely like the possible Xander/Buffy that you threw in there, can't wait to see what Kitiara's reaction to the ensouled corpse will be. I did find it a bit off that Kitiara would know what adoption papers would be and her easy acceptance of modern technology but I'm will to chalk it up to Joyce explaining things to her. Still very good story and I am definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
-AlastorGodofVengeance
Review By [Alastor] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and entertaining story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Finally another chapter! And finally Kit shows, why she is dangerous. Will Xander 'return' to Krynn? And how will a 'good' Kitiara change the War of the Lance?
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Razial
Review:
ok I may have wrote part of this chapter but I still think you set it up very nicely, and I cannot wait to see what you come up with for the next chapter(razial)
Comments from author:
ahh me neiter, but you know my lazy butt...so it will take a while
Review By [Razial] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting start as well as being a blast from the past.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Razial
Review:
ok now that was a good update, I liked the way you introudeced Xander and girls to Katira. Kinda funny to see Xander's reaction to the news he really is not related to the Harris's. Can't wait for more keep it up

david
Comments from author:
tx for reading raz and who would be relived to not be related to TH?
Review By [Razial] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from lillyb
Review:
YES. YES. YES. you updated ( I am currently doing the Snoopy dance... but ya know in my head :)
Comments from author:
what a shame... a nice video on youtube of that would have been great *g*
thank you for liking this story
Review By [lillyb] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Jaylynn
Review:
Wow I haven't read those books since forever... And I'm still missing the third story of the ones I did read. Sorry you just got me thinking of them with this story. It seems like an interesting story but I think xander seemed to trusting. Still want to see more of this though...lots more.
Comments from author:
ahh if you start to read the last story of them then now because of my humble story, that's the best gift u can give me and yes he seems kinda trusting, because his biggest wish seems to become true, but don't overlook that the next talk will be in the same room with adults he really trust.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Darksnider
Review:
My only issue with stuff like this is the fact that their having this conversation in a group and not alone.

It's a bit hard to have a private moment in a group.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CrystalBlaze
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Well, that's one way to keep Kitiara from taking up the cause of ol' Tacky.

I do see her thumping Caramon whenever he gets too deeply into the ale after this, however.

Gods only know how Raist is gonna take the story, however..

Thanks for this and keep up the good work.

(As most gods can only grant spells up to 2nd level in planes they are not venerated, it does make sense that any blessed object shy of an artifact will take longer, but get the job done, so the way you handled the ashen demise of Carlos works. Just saying..)
Comments from author:
thank you for enjoying it so far and yep that sounds good with th 2nd lvl thing
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from uten
Review:
A very interesting start, and I hope we get to see some flashbacks of Kitiara's time hunting for info on how to open the portal.

I'm really looking forward to Xander and Kitiara meeting, and her reaction when she finds out how he was raised should be memorable.

Can't wait to read the next chapter of this!
Comments from author:
thank you and ch 2 is written and will be posted tomorrow or the day after that...hmm didn't even thought about flashbacks...but the idea has merit
Review By [uten] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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