That was the perfect mixture of sweetness and sadness. I had tears in my eyes as a read the last few lines. Because of course Draco and Harry would never leave their daughter alone. Very touching with the best amount of angst.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the rec! And a huge thank you for the review.
I think that you're right, Harry and Draco would never leave their children alone in the world. They'd probably still look after them from beyond the grave, Harry with his fits of temper when they tried to date and Draco with his concern masked as scorn.
:)
Review By [zimes] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
He would be standing next to her with his arms crossed, his eyebrow arched and his perfectly haughty voice saying that of course his daughter would be ambitious.--- :) This made me smile.
She could feel a tendril of treacherous hope swirling its way into her heart. – I love alliteration; you have such a way with words.
*sigh* Damn you for killing them *sigh* This is another example of why you are one of my favorite writers on this site. This truly pulled at my heart strings and was as darkly beautiful as a stormy sky. Loved this.
Although, not the best way to start my morning *hee* Now need to watch/read something silly before I go to work ;)
Well Done!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you liked, but yeah- it's probably best to read/watch something silly before going to work.
I can personally recommend Mahaliem as an awesome Drarry shipper. Her work never fails to make me laugh.
www.mahaliem.livejournal.com
Review By [Luna] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow, this was so...tangible and real. Even with the minor grammatical errors ('Papa' is a pronoun and should be capitalized when Lily is personally calling to him by this name), this was amazing and beautiful.
Bravo.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you liked, even with the errors. :)
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Luna