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Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from lorwen
Review:
This story was amazing...
The only continuity errors I saw as that bit about having sex with Anya...
a bit early, but otherwise an amazing story...
I hope you will continue it...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from AXanFan
Review:
So glad you updated this -- I am really liking this x-over. Always liked Poltergeist - The Legacy and Nick is my favorite there. If you are going to slash I would love it to be Xander/Nick, but I would most like to see a strong brotherly bond for them. Xander could really use that and frankly so could Nick -- they would be good for each other -- I love the scenes you wrote with them together.

I really like Derek being all protective and fatherly(?). Xander could so use a great "family" in his life. He could also help them too -- they all seemed to be more positive around him. They all seemed to laugh more when he was around -- not laughing at him, but just enjoying his company.

I really think Giles is getting a bit jealous -- it is funny to Derek & Giles fighting over him -- not just because they have a past, but they want to protect Xander. I hope Xander will still be involved with the Scoobies -- I loved seeing both Cordy and Oz -- I missed them when they left the series.

Found the possible x-over with Julian and Cash interesting -- I've only watched a few episodes, but there are some possibilities there -- but mainly I would like to read about Xander with the Legacy cast -- Love that Phillip made Xander nervous and he would so impress Alex & Rachel -- he is very respectful and usually does well with women he isn't trying to date. (ha,ha)

I know you say there will be a next part, but I couldn't find it -- are you still working on it -- can't wait to read -- please update soon!!! Thanks for this -- really enjoyed it.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 2" from banner
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I really enjoy this story. I've read it at least three times, and it just gets better. Watching the characters interact is fun. They are all so very real to me.
I hope you continue this series.
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from MavenAlysse
Review:
Love this story. I've always enjoyed 'Poltergeist: the Legacy'. Adding the Scooby gang into the mix is a definite plus in my book.

I agree with Xander - it smells like a set up. Rayne already mentioned that he was plotting to nudge Xander in the right direction. I'm guessing they'll use this situation as their way to bring Xander to San Fran.

As to that spirit/demon lady - can't wait to see what happens with her. All in all, a wonderfully written story, and I look forward to reading the next 'book'.

Thank you so much for sharing!

-MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
i love xander stories, but when i saw this under poltergeist i was hesitant to give it a shot, then one of my friends was telling me that this had nothing to do with the movie, so i gave it a shot and wow, this is awsome once i started i couldn't stop then i got to the end and wanted more so again WOW and i hope to read more soon
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from Neverwillmini
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When he first met them, I loved the interaction between Xander, Nick, and Derrick. By the end of the story however, I started getting the impression that they're starting to treat him like Buffy & Willow do - wanting him to sit out the fight 'to protect him'. I hope Xander will be his usual stubborn self and refuse to be railroaded by them into doing what they want with his life.

Considering how narrowly they've averted apocalypses in the past, I'd be worried just how the Sunnydale team is going to fare. Post graduation they've lost Angel, Cordelia, and Xander from the team (Faith too, but she's been out of it for a while now). That's half the overall team and more than half of their actual fighters. They'll either need new members to continue maintaining the fight, or they're going to start racking up injuries and possibly missing something important.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from kayron
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WHEW!!! Way to close with tattoo man!! And again, what is up with invisible demon lady? I am definitely looking forward to the continuation of this story!
Review By [kayron] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview LF2" from Vilkath
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Preview or not this chapter seeems to skip wildly from the last one and I really don't like Xander being conned into such a set up so easily. Plus big or not the guy was only human I doubt Xander would just sit there and pray to a god he probably doens't believe in, I mean where was god when all the hellmouthy things happen? He would lash out and kick the guy in the balls or something, a guy who can fight demons and take down vampires should be able disable a normal human easily enough.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another interesting family moment. Well done and thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 1" from silentflux
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I just found this story and wow - is it fun :) The characterizations are wonderful and I love how you've meshed the fandoms! Also, The Kindred? Such an awesome addition! And in a way that is totally believable. I can't wait for the next part!
Review By [silentflux] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 1" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 1" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written meeting of the two factions but I would have liked to have seen more of Derek and Giles meeting.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 1" from DennSedai
Review:
*growls and shakes the computer* No....you can't keep doing evil cliff hangers like that, especially with that many parts left unresolved....
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - part 1" from kayron
Review:
So Giles and Derek got to yell at each other, but no blood was spilled. So all in all that sounds like a pretty good meeting! Now. What is up with the demon spirit thingy that wants a piece of Xander? Is she/it like preying mantis lady who wants to fertilize her young, and then eat the donor? I like this story, and I look forward to the next chapter!
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - part 2" from Eureka
Review:
More please....
Great story, I think I had read this or something like it a while back, but I'm not sure. I'll have to check back on the date you started this. LOL
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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