this is a good story, is there a sequel?

glad you enjoyed it, at the moment there is no sequel even though I always planned for one however I got carried away with other ideas and so far I've not gotten back to it. hopefully I will sometime soon. (razial)

What is the timeline in this story?

In chapter one you state that Prue and Xander are the same age (or around there)... but she's already in her mid twenties when the first season starts. When Xander went on his road trip, just after graduation, he was 18 or 19 -- depending on when his birthday is...

When Piper starts up P3, and when the whole buissness with Cole is happening, Prue is in her late twenties.

To me, this does not add up... the story just seems so confused to me. You're smashing together timelines and events haphazardly, and it's like trying to force a sqare peg into a round hole...

I'm sorry if I'm perseved as too harsh.. this is just my honest oppinion, you should go over this again; it needs tightening. I think you can do better.

I just wanted to point out that there are some inconsistensies in this chapter... Like first Xander is having a frapp and then he's suddenly drinking tea.. might wanna fix that.

Another great story. I hope you decide to continue this one.

Tremendous story the author has written!!! I was quite taken with Prue and Xander getting together! And I'll be checking the author's other stories to see if a sequel to this story was penned.

Great story, thoroughly enjoyable.

I am curious when the second part is going to be written. And if you ever rewrite this, you might want to bring in the info on Xander being 20 a little earlier.

Looking forward to the next set of installments.

Any idea when the second part of the story with come out?

I'm afriad not, I have the details already plotted out and a few more plans for it however with so many other current stories still going I have delayed working anymore on it, hopefully it will come out soon. Thanks for asking(razial)

I really liked this story and would love to read more. :)
Congrats and all the best!

Just reread this one and reminded myself why I liked it the first time. Really hope to see the sequal sometime in the not too distant future.

one of your best so far i look forward to the sequel keep up the good work thanks and bye.

I like this story. It shows all the characters in a postive light while allowing Xander to move on. Welld one. I look forward to seeing more when you add to this series.

This was wonderful. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait for the next installment.

I will definitely pick up the sequel when it is ready. I am so glad that Paige is being introduced to the family early. I hope that this version of meeting the family doesn't include meeting the Source, and having the nosy detective following them around! I like the idea of Paige being able to get to know Prue. If Phoebe and Tara are taking an interest in each other, where will Cole fit in? In the series she accepted him back for a while. Things didn't work because he became the Source. Will this end up being Phoebe/Tara/Cole? Or will Cole be the Big Bad that they will all have to fight off? I look forward to seeing how the story will develop!

Great ending for this story. I'm glad that you decided to do a series of stories, since I love this pairing. Can't wait for the next one to come out.

Well, a cliche ridden chapter but not bad over all. Though it is all one summary and for the most part be summed up in the 'and they lived happily ever after'. The chapter seemed to go around and fix every problem everyone had in 100 words or less.