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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
OK. Great way to end the story, but it SCREAMS sequel! When will we get to see it?
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like this child is going to be a powerful one. Question is, will it come to term or not, with Cole on the run from the bounty hunters sent after him by The Source.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
Review:
UH OH! Prue, PREGNANT? And Xander is the father? This is going to mean problems for a lot of people!
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
Well, now that Xander knows about the Charmed Ones, and the Charmed Ones know about Xander and the Slayer, it makes things much easier to work with. And Tara is safe for now at the Halliwell Manor. Time to see if she will stay put, but head on down to Sunnydale against instructions.
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
Well, at least Prue had some idea of what Sunnydale was. And seeing Xander as the White Knight, is proving to her that Xander knows what he is doing.
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from loretta
Review:
this is a good story, is there a sequel?
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it, at the moment there is no sequel even though I always planned for one however I got carried away with other ideas and so far I've not gotten back to it. hopefully I will sometime soon. (razial)
Review By [loretta] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from PyretofSweden
Review:
What is the timeline in this story?

In chapter one you state that Prue and Xander are the same age (or around there)... but she's already in her mid twenties when the first season starts. When Xander went on his road trip, just after graduation, he was 18 or 19 -- depending on when his birthday is...

When Piper starts up P3, and when the whole buissness with Cole is happening, Prue is in her late twenties.

To me, this does not add up... the story just seems so confused to me. You're smashing together timelines and events haphazardly, and it's like trying to force a sqare peg into a round hole...

I'm sorry if I'm perseved as too harsh.. this is just my honest oppinion, you should go over this again; it needs tightening. I think you can do better.
Review By [PyretofSweden] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PyretofSweden
Review:
I just wanted to point out that there are some inconsistensies in this chapter... Like first Xander is having a frapp and then he's suddenly drinking tea.. might wanna fix that.
Review By [PyretofSweden] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mordare
Review:
Another great story. I hope you decide to continue this one.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Tremendous story the author has written!!! I was quite taken with Prue and Xander getting together! And I'll be checking the author's other stories to see if a sequel to this story was penned.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Dustmote
Review:
Great story, thoroughly enjoyable.

I am curious when the second part is going to be written. And if you ever rewrite this, you might want to bring in the info on Xander being 20 a little earlier.

Looking forward to the next set of installments.
Review By [Dustmote] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Seagul
Review:
Any idea when the second part of the story with come out?
Comments from author:
I'm afriad not, I have the details already plotted out and a few more plans for it however with so many other current stories still going I have delayed working anymore on it, hopefully it will come out soon. Thanks for asking(razial)
Review By [Seagul] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from msdarque
Review:
I really liked this story and would love to read more. :)
Congrats and all the best!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
Just reread this one and reminded myself why I liked it the first time. Really hope to see the sequal sometime in the not too distant future.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Narf
Review:
one of your best so far i look forward to the sequel keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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