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Breaking the Cycle

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eset
Review:
Any chance of your continuing this? I'm loving the way you write Dudley, and really can't wait to see how he ends up talking with Oz.

I know it's been abandoned for a couple years, now, but I'd love to see more.
Review By [eset] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Review:
A deep and interesting view, but a bit lacking in Oz.
Also, maybe more suited for the redemption seeing crowd after the murder/suicide, so eventual crossing might work better with Angel or Faith.
Also, not sure why you use the / and call it pairing and then directly call it not romantic, why not symply use & and friendship or meeting instad of creating double confusion?
Review By [MBB] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful thanks for the update. I am very very glad that Dudley is growing up.
Review By [twlight] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Karis
Review:
okay chapter one was tainted by anger, but it worked. Because in this chapter we see that angers effects. Dudley in effect 'wakes up' and starts on the path toward something better.
For me the HP books dont work very well, the sadism and abuse he suffers makes me question things too much. however I did enjoy this take on a otherwise horrible character.
Review By [Karis] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sandi
Review:
Logical reasons for Dudley to change, motivation from differennt sources. This sounds good. Please continue.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [15 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
So far, a good beginning - I would like to see Dudley's redemption.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from twlight
Review:
This looks like it could be a rather good story. I hope you continue.
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from mokahi
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Ooh, yes. Please do continue! You've set up a wonderful beginning that shows Dudley's worldview. Dudley's attitudes are quite logical when looked at from that point of view. I love the change in Piers. I look forward to seeing how this change influences Dudley.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from SlowMercury
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This is a good look at Dudley so far, and it's pretty diametrically opposed to Oz's world view. I would be curious to see how/where you're going with this...
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)Emergency
Review:
Please continue. I'm intrigued...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Emergency] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Sunstar
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Interesting! ^-^ I'm very curious where this is going, and the possible character growth Dudley might go through. And Oz, wherever he comes in.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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