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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Mcspender
Review:
And the operation Return is on.
Let's see how the slayers plan for the next part of the game, and for the babies too=D.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Too bad it won't be the Buffy-Baby. : )
You can't imagine how I had to resist the urge to throw in Ouroboros from the Ringword series.

All will be resolved soon.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Mcspender
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So, the secret was in the blood, after all.
Those leechs polluted our core to serve their needs, ok. Nothing that a good ol heavy cheating can't fix.
So, the Destroyer is dead, ya know something, I alway wondered where do the inmortals go when they die.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
If they saved thier money Vegas, if not New Jersey.
The thing about beings of infinite power is that any part of them is also infinite.

Time to grab the goggles and go climb Mt Surayya. I think it's cooled off by now.


Next Chapter Soon!

PS: “Shouldn’t you be somewhere gestating?” That line cracks me up.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Mcspender
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So, the señor Padre... Senior Partner pushes da Big botton that goes boom... that's , how da call 'hem?.
Ah yeah, a complete waste of a good moment to do some damage, I mean Drusilla found out the truth, Dru of all people.
And if the slayers are beyond the curve, well, it's time to take a shorcut and do some heavy cheating :P.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
I resisted the urge to blow up a lot of people cuz that would have been another five page sub-plot.
Besides, the Senior Partners would rather control you than destroy you

They're very big on having the apocalypse on thier schedule.

It and the fan are about to collide. You'll see what I mean.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Mcspender
Review:
Good plan, very good revelation about that wonder weapon; damn lazy writing, I mean, Buffy and the Slayers were doing all right, and they had to pull out the scythe and a new group out of nowhere, a group that no one knew anything about?.
Yeah right =P.
A weapon is a weapon, never mind it's origin.
And Amir is gettin' lucky =P.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Right there with c'ha. Always felt that the Guardians were a little too ex machina.
When I saw the grey haired old lady pop out of nowhere I went WTF?

As far as Surayya and Amir, hey, everybody needs love. : )

PS: If you get a chance check out the anime Ikkitousen and Queens Blade.


Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Mcspender
Review:
ah, the wonders of modern life, you can't take a bath after having a flaming mountain dropped on ya, without being smsed or having an out-of-body urgent meeting about something or the other :P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
You should see what happens when you're on the potty. : )

And apparently, a pulsating shower head is a girls best friend.

The troops are gathering for the battles to come while on Arrakis the air is full of demon ash and desert sand.
Nothing bad EVER happens with that combination.

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Mcspender
Review:
So the last Senior Pardner wants to play rough?.
Ok, letse how he plays hardball :P.
And Sineya talks about the end game... ya know, this is good, at last the big shots are talking clearly.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
The thing about the big boys and the big girls is that they are so tight lipped.
Nothing turns out exactly as planned.
You'll see what I mean.

Next chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from Mcspender
Review:
Death from the Skies!!!!!!.
Cool and awesome!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
That my friend is how you close a Hellmouth
and wipe out thousands of your enemies at the same. : )

Who cares if now a nice chunk of the desert is airborne. It just makes the sunsets prettier.

Next Chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from Mcspender
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Fun for the whole family =D!!!.
A big brawl in Arrakis, come for the fun, have nukeload of fun!.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Hey, if you get a chance view the game trailer for starcraft II.
You'll see where I'm going with this.

I wish those corporate telepaths would stop stealing my plot lines. : )

Next Chapter Soon!

PS: Take a look at the game trailer for The Secret World.
http://bloodydog.com/videos-game-videos-trailers.cfm

It's slayerrific!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mcspender
Review:
So, the game plan is revealed, and Dru enters the game.
Rock on mate, let the end game begin =D!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
And remember, never sit near the entrance during staff meetings.
Ya never know what may sneak in. : )

Next chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Mcspender
Review:
Hell on Arrakis, the good guys outnumbered a lot to one, the main bad guy is a little bit pissed off.
Businnes as usual =D!!.
It's gonna be a WAAAAAAAAAAHG to remember!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Internal Memo to All Senior Partners: Stop resurrecting vampires. Especially the crazy ones.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from Mcspender
Review:
The oncoming storm... sounds like a visit from a Doctor who speak english with a british accent and travels in a Big Blue Box is near, maybe when the baby is due ;) ?.
And let the Turok-Han come, let's see how they deal against the desert sons of Arrakis.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
"Hey ma, what's a 'Police Box'?
"Stay focused kid."

I try to avoid three-ways. Too damn sticky. : )

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Mcspender
Review:
Yep, this people concept of security is kinda lazy =P.
And now Moto knows for sure about Ili last fight, and boy, bio-mom alert!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Hey Buddy, Happy 4th of July.
And oh yeah, when the s**t hits the fan bio-mom will be the least of moto's concerns.

Next Chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
So the Partners are like the Ancients of the BTVS universe? Interesting, verry interesting.
And Dru is back, let see if she's still insane.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hey Buddy!

Yep, Dru is still bats**t crazy and she can see the future.
And now she's Bene Gesserit.

Good Times. : )

Next chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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