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Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from garrycooper
Review:
I like a lot!!!!!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Tainted has written a very good piece to this point!! I certainly wish the author had continued, however, I know not what happened to tainted.:(
Comments from author:
I've been preoccupied with R.L. the last while but the next chapter has been written and betad. As soon as I get it back to my beta for her to go over the corrections and then get it back from her, I'll post the next chapter. Within a week to a week and a half (8/16 today) at the most.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
interesting start and I'm curios what will happen next.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from Meneldur
Review:
Interesting chapter. I don't have much to say about it, because it seems the main focus of it is to develop Willow and Buffy's relationship, and that's what happened. There wasn't much conflict, except the beginning. I assume the masters will be pissed, and that they'll want Buffy to learn how not to fight, or some such thing. Lastly, Willow should be wary of Atris - I assume we don't want to see her as one of the Handmaidens. Personally, I hope we see Kreia or Revan soon.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from Iceflame
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This is entertaining indeed. I can definitely see the possibility of Buffster going Revan. Hoping to see more a BIT faster, no? I had no clue this gem was even out until now.

What the Masters don't even stop to think about, sometimes by deciding on the fly, you can CREATE the 'seen' future. Especially if the ones you're judging are vulnerable enough. If Buffster goes Dark, I can see Willow never totally trusting the Council again. For of them all, she knew Buffy, pretty much everything.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shattered Hearts" from Cmiller
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That was interesting and I can't wait for more...but I have to ask is Buffy = Revan and is Willow = Exile or vise versa? Anyway I look forward to more.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from Gideon
Review:
A good start and I like that you didn't use the portal in The Gift as your start point. Buffy's instincts as the Slayer seem to have survived into the new Universe and we know that Willow has the potential to be even more powerful (especially if she goes Dark) A bit of training would do them both good, but I can't see any of the Masters being happy with Buffy's attitude! Should be fun to see where you take it form here.
Comments from author:
The Gift is so overused, especially in Star Wars crossovers, there was just no way I could bring myself to use it. The Masters will never be happy with Buffy's attitude. That's one of the reason's I chose the KOTOR era for the crossover.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Excellent start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, but the combo of Wiffy goodness and Star Wars looks very promising and its cool to see the end of Witch used as the jumping off point.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. The main reason I started writing this is that there just isn't much Wiffy in Star Wars crossovers.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
great start! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from CPTSkip
Review:
An interesting, if a bit odd, beginning. But I definitely look forward to more of your story.
Comments from author:
Most of my stuff is a bit odd, lol.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tearing the Veil" from DarthPayne
Review:
Huh, an interesting start.

I look forward to seeing more.

Is this set before, during or after K1?
Comments from author:
It's set before K1 at this point.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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